 Lauria 5/13/02 . chapter 1 Good use of quotes from the movie. Short but well done. Fits my perception of his character and yhose scenes. Good ficlet. |
 Marcher 10/11/01 . chapter 1Powerful! |
 ducky 7/17/01 . chapter 1 awesome, write more. this was very good. |
 Attila 7/11/01 . chapter 1Great story! Very Cool! I loved the use of the quotes! |
 Lady Razor 6/24/01 . chapter 1 That was excellent! Very well done. |
 Aeris not signed in yet 6/20/01 . chapter 1 This was very very good. You captured Maximus' character perfectly. Really great job on this. |
 Aeris not signed in yet 6/20/01 . chapter 1 This was very very good. You captured Maximus' character perfectly. Really great job on this. |
 Finding Beauty 6/7/01 . chapter 1An excellent vignette... It could have easily been ruined by use of more modern slang and grammar, but the writer pulls it off wonderfully. |
 Dizzy 5/15/01 . chapter 1SOB...SOB...wonderful...SOB...SOB...
(sorry it's a short, quite simple review but it's all i can say...) |
 Quicksilver19 5/7/01 . chapter 1Awesome! Keep writing! |
 phoenixangel 4/16/01 . chapter 1 *sobs loudly...* MAXIMUS! so sad...but brilliant story! and i loved the quotes from the movie that u put in the story. they fit into the story well. well...i just watched the movie (4 times in fact) this friday, and i have to say, at first i didn't like it (cuz i only saw a few parts of it...i was finishing hw) and then i saw it the second time...and i TOTALLY fell in love with maximus...well, i'm sorry that he died in the movie...but at least he's with his family again. |
 Agent Dalton 4/8/01 . chapter 1Very nice, I love the emotion. |
 jay 4/7/01 . chapter 1 won-der-ful. really good. it could have been longer (maybe focus a little more on details), but that's all i can see for improvement. keep on writing! |
 lareinemargot 4/6/01 . chapter 1great job. |
 Todie 4/5/01 . chapter 1 Oooooohhhh...good...very good. Well written, I love the emotions! |