Good use of quotes from the movie. Short but well done. Fits my perception of his character and yhose scenes. Good ficlet.

Powerful!

awesome, write more. this was very good.

Great story! Very Cool! I loved the use of the quotes!

That was excellent! Very well done.

This was very very good. You captured Maximus' character perfectly. Really great job on this.

This was very very good. You captured Maximus' character perfectly. Really great job on this.

An excellent vignette... It could have easily been ruined by use of more modern slang and grammar, but the writer pulls it off wonderfully.

SOB...SOB...wonderful...SOB...SOB...

(sorry it's a short, quite simple review but it's all i can say...)

Awesome! Keep writing!

*sobs loudly...* MAXIMUS! so sad...but brilliant story! and i loved the quotes from the movie that u put in the story. they fit into the story well. well...i just watched the movie (4 times in fact) this friday, and i have to say, at first i didn't like it (cuz i only saw a few parts of it...i was finishing hw) and then i saw it the second time...and i TOTALLY fell in love with maximus...well, i'm sorry that he died in the movie...but at least he's with his family again.

Very nice, I love the emotion.

won-der-ful. really good. it could have been longer (maybe focus a little more on details), but that's all i can see for improvement. keep on writing!

great job.

Oooooohhhh...good...very good. Well written, I love the emotions!