nice poem! oh and by the way I'M WAITING FOR YOUR WHISTLE! lol

LOVE the poem! man, i hope you get the "perfect" ending in ffx-2 after writing this P

aww, poor yuna. T_T

Really good, very creative, it sounds like something Yuna would say if she had a monolouge.

Oh, that is so sad. I loved it. Just to tell you, I also cried when Tidus jumped down. I had never cried for a video game like that ever. Nice poem.

*sobs* poor yun... Poor Tidus! WHY? WHY DID HE HAD TO GO? *sobs* I love it! bye bye !

omg :'( yeah ffx is SO frgn sad. i was like rly mad actually lol. i choked up when yuna told tidus she loved him and stuff. and he gave her a hug(i remember that day i was talking to my hamster lmao and she said i love you and im WTF? she said that and i had to beat it again to hear if she rly said it) but yea ever since ive been trying my best to beat ffx-2 (even tho ive already ruined it for myself watching the "perfect" and "good" ending on the internet! lol well its like a freakin chor to beat it) im glad u like my story real emotion so far. i just updated so YAY lol well buh bye

So sweet!

I love Yunie, it hurts me to see her cry. T.T

Whoa... Hey. not love Yunie that way! Sicko.

Anyway, update other stories or I shall go BOOM!

That is so... *cries*

Ok no crying.

That is so touching and so deep and yeah...

Go Yuna! Tell it like it is...

I agree; it is insanely sad at the end of 10! What het's me most is when Yuna makes her little speech at the end. ooh, and when she's on the pier just before and she's whistling! Oh, and when you see the two pyreflies on the black screen! Ok, I think that's everything... wait! Yeah, also when he hugs her and walks through her! Anyways, loved the poem, especially the last line! So sad! You should write more poetry! Maybe you could use it to impress that lovely substitute of yours!

That's...sweet...

very touching, and deep, bravo!

I read, I cried, and now I am reviewing. Sound familiar? Well, it is also true, so keep up the good writing. That was so sad, I am crying. Anyways, write some more poems, your pretty good. Okay, so this is my review and it is the longest that I think I have ever written.

Yunie19

Ah! That was sweet Brie! And sad. And sweet! And sad. And sweet! Ok, I'm going to stop now! But that was GOOD!

Aw. It's so sad... yeah, the cutscene at the very end when Yuna's standing on the dock whistling ALWAYS makes me cry. The angst is so cute. And the love is even cuter...

Good job...