Sequel please?

Great story!

"What in the hell just happened?" he blared.

"I kissed you," Potter answered. "Rather poorly, but the position was awkward."

"What… Why?"

"Why does one person kiss another?"

"You couldn't…"

"I could."

"You can't…"

"I am…"

"You …"

"I like you."

"That's not possible."

"I assure you it is."

"How…"

Hahahaha i can't stop laughing while reading this part.

I imagine Severus's face when he stuttered like that lol

Very very well written.

Though i kinda expect there to be a lemon scene :D

(A sequel maybe -)

Well, keep up the good work..!

Love,

burakkuneko

Haha I loved all their exchanges, and your Harry was really funny and interesting. I thought that the idea that they would make a contract and have a business meeting for their romantic life as well quite funny. Shame it was only a oneshot but actually I think it worked quite well and it was a good place to finish.

this was a wonderful story and i loved reading it gr8 job!

That was really nice.

It's been ages since I last enjoyed a well-written piece of HP/SS fiction; one that's in character yet light and pleasant to read.

Thank you for sharing! )

This was sooo funny!

I absolutely loved it!

And it was written so brilliantly too!

You're really very talented, dear!

;D

That was a very cute ending.

The new generation of Hogwarts! The GW/DM partnership, in particular, is a good idea. :)

I loved it!

indeed both seam very real and authentic. Severus is so funny, but still Snape :)

It would be nice to have some bed action though :P

Great story. Fantastic banter between Harry and Severus.

thanks for sharing!

Bah. Isso foi perfeito.

*snicker* Only our Severus Snape would negotiate the terms of his own romance. It's a very sweet story!

Awwwwwww! How sweet... I think Harry is the only one who could turn Severus from slimy git to romantic, LOL!

Hahahaha hehehehehe! This part cracked me up!

Severus agreed that there would be post-coital snuggling Tuesdays, Thursdays, alternate Sundays, and most holidays. Harry agreed not to use Quidditch terminology in bed but was allowed to bring up House rivalry. Hahahaha!

Excellent! Great characterization of both people.