 Wolfy 2006-11-05 . chapter 8 Nice story, I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked the end. I expected it to be when Darth Vader dies and Ani and Obi are reunited in the Force but... well, this is better. More dramatic, not so fluffy ;-)
The only thing I did not like was the part when all the ghosts talked to each other. Because 1. it was ironic and that just did not fit and 2. I do not agree that Luke is the chosen one. I think on the making of dvd of revenge or the sith, George Lucas said that Anakin really was the chosen one, not Luke.
Anyway, nice story and THANKS! |
 Alley Parker 2006-05-07 . chapter 8This fic was great! I loved it! Awesomw job :) |
 XtinethePirate 2006-03-07 . chapter 8This is a beautiful story! I have never read a fic that combined the warring personalities of Anakin and Vader so well. I also loved that you managed to make both Anakin and Obi-Wan more... contemporary, you know what I mean? Expression wise, at least ... without really losing their distinctive character voices.
And ah, fractured time in a story. So reminiscent of Faulkner, who is a god of literature. ^^. And it wasn't at all confusing, your transitions were smooth as they flowed not only from time to time within a set chapter, but in the intervals between chapters as well. Sometime when University isn't kicking my **, I'm going to come back and read this in chronological order as per your outline at the end of chapter 8.
Thank you for a pleasant break from school and a wonderful read! This is going on my favourites list, and you are going on my alerts (*cough* write more SW soon! *cough*)
Xtine |
 BrynneEryn 2006-02-06 . chapter 8I have really enjoyed your fic. I love it that it spanned all six movies--that's something that we don't often see-and you even took it on to the afterlife. (I have a weakness for A/O as Force ghosts, lol). The playfulness in the afterlife among the Jedi was so sweet-I adored it.
I saw you say that you said you aren't good at the sex slash scenes--that is not true at all! I found several of the scenes extremely hot! I hope you keep writing SW slash fics with these two Jedi.
I thought the stream of consciousness was interesting as well--I enjoyed the abruptness that happened by the past and the present. Vader's annoyance was perfect, as was Obi-Wan's continued acceptance of his lover/apprentice/best friend.
I like their special bond, and the way that Obi-Wan admits his attraction first. And the way he lets his hand run across the back of Anakin's neck in chapter 4--I got goose-bumps just like Anakin did!
Really fascinating story and I hope you write some more of them. |
 ooooinvalidooo 2006-01-31 . chapter 8*cries* it's over, that makes me sad but i loved it! I've been reading it since the beggining and now it's over...not too sure what to do with myself now :( |
 Odiarda 2006-01-31 . chapter 8 argh no ! I can't stop like this ! I want more !! :'( Ah, that was awesome. This fic was so good !! Hope you'll write another one about Obi/Ani like this !! ;) And if you don't, I'll ennoy you until you do ! lol |
 Nelotizapu 2006-01-30 . chapter 8Since you said to review, I will (I don't review often).
I've been reading since chapter 3 or 4. I liked it. It was very unique how you went back and forth between the prequels and the trilogy. And how Obi-Wan's love for Anakan continued even after he became Vader...
Well written and original. I hope you write more wonderful AniObi in the future. |
 forceflow46 2006-01-30 . chapter 8 ohh did you HAVE to end it THERE more more more PLLEAASEE
sob sob please more what if anakin realizes what hes done? what if after the death star has been destroyed and they find out who the pilot was what if he comes to understand HOW obi has "become more powerful that you could possibly imagine" ? it could anger him that that hes played right into his hands or maybe he would genuinely regret taking the life of one who was so much to himself and also protected his child even that he distroyed his chance to know about his child(ren) and maybe he calls out to obi wans spirit for forgiveness and help and to be able to know his child(ren). what if obi appears to him?
Snow |
 Odiarda 2006-01-29 . chapter 7 ah ! That was great ! I can't believe there's only one chapter left !! Hope it'll be as long as it can be !! I want romance ! lol *hysterical* |
 THIboxNK 2006-01-26 . chapter 4I really like you story! ^-^! It's really good. The only thing I don't totally agree on is your theory of Luke being the chosen one (I hate Luke...).
You see, I have this theory that Anakin, in the end, did bring balance to the Force. You see, first he killed off the Jedi. And, twenty somethin' years later, he killed off the last of the Sith. So, you see, Anakin fulfilled the prophecy, in his own weird, Sithish (that's not a word, I know) way.
But really, your story is so good! I've never had the courage to actually write a Star Wars fanfic yet... but maybe, someday, it'll happen. |
 Jess-n-S 2006-01-13 . chapter 7 Ugh, i knew i didn't review on this chapter yet!*hits self* bad Jessie! Anayway, i can't wait for the finale! I'm excited. ^-^ |
 i luv ewansmile 2006-01-01 . chapter 7This is a really unique story, I've never seen anyone flash so easly between the past and present. Your story is well written, and I'm enjoying reading it! I can't wait for the next and final chapter! Please, update as soon as you can! |
 i luv ewansmile 2006-01-01 . chapter 3*Sque!* I love this part: “Anakin, can’t you at least wait till we’re home. Patience is part of the Jedi code.” “I think we should add screwing in public to the Jedi Code.” “Well…I am on the council now…”
At least this time there are two Jedi with ** eating grins walking down the hall… |
 i luv ewansmile 2006-01-01 . chapter 2Aw! I luv that last line! |
 Vee017 2005-12-30 . chapter 7Yay! New chapter! What a great way to begin a new year with reading an update of one of my favourite fics:) I love how Obi-Wan placates and tempts Anakin with sex. If there's something that will make him do something, it's that:)
"Fine. You are totally bottoming for this." Excellet line, I can just hear him saying that too.
And Vader remembers Obi-Wan and is willing to learn. I can't wait for your finale now ^_^ Thanks for the update! |