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LadyPhoenix99
2005-08-05 . chapter 1
I actually read this for the first time and it is... well.. wow! It is kind of nict to know someone can see Kaiba the way I see him. As much as he hates Yugi, he hates because Yugi has what he knows deep inside he really wants. It is a shame that his stepfather treated him the way he did- but it also made him the ruthless CEO he needed to be. There are good and bad sides to it.
I would like to see the insighte of other charcters as you get time to do them.
Shyly in the Dark
2005-06-02 . chapter 1
*tugs shyly on sleeve* Pretty shyly pretty please yes more shyly pretty please? *ducks behind leighc*

*chuckles* We would like to see more of this one friend and our sympathies with the writer's block. Shyness...ya got a request luv? *laughs as shy turns purple and hides further* In the words of Ace Ventura...Al righty then. You take care dragon hun. *waves before chasing after the retreating shy one*
Aku Chibi
2005-06-01 . chapter 1
Hey this is good. Continue. Maybe make them longer? (not meant to be offensive) It's very . . . smart? I guess. A request . . . Maybe Malik? or Bakura? Or someone from the new season. Mm, oh well. Please continue!
-Aku
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