Alright. I liked the evil Scarlet Spider's witty dialog back then in the middle of the clone saga and I'm glad someone remembered it. Still, it was a little too fast to get connected to the chatracters emotionally, so work on that next time.

I really appreciate the effort and thought you're putting into this. And it's clear you have true fondness for the characters, but the pace of the story is too fast for me. I don't get a chance to feel for the characters or empathize the situation they're in. I like to get emotionally involved in a story and my imagination isn't good enough to do it without the author's help. Just my opinion and I hope it doesn't deter you at all from continuing. Thanks for sharing!

When can we look forward to the further adventures of Agent Bruce Banner, the Scarlet Spider? This had so much potential and ... oh well.

Very nice chapter.

Cool chapter I like it.