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velja 2006-11-12 ch 10,	abuseHey, I like this very much so far. Are you going to continue any time soon? I really hope so. Please, update, okay?
Thayet-Victoria 2006-06-05 ch 10,	abuseI really enjoy this story. Can't wait for a new installment. Excited to see how Doug wins Jack over
missmiamya 2006-03-22 ch 10,	abuseHey I love your story so far. This is a review for all of it. I wrote them down as I was reading and am now going to post it. 1:Lots of detail I love it. I don’t venture out of Degrassi fandom much, but for Jack and Doug I figured I could do it. Lol keep up the great work. 2: Wow could Jack have been any more forward with asking about that guy?! Lol Good chapter though! 3:Uh-OH Sticky situation! There is a connection there for sure! I wonder how long it takes them to admit it to themselves/each other. 4: Pacey will get to the bottom of it, and Jack’s behavior is just another sign that the other night wasn’t just drunken sex, but that he secretly wanted it to happen! 5: I told you Jack wants him! So obvious…was Doug’s kiss merely a drunken thing or was there meaning to it?! I think there was! 6: Way to talk him into something he doesn’t want to do Jack! Will Doug actually come out to Pacey?! 7: Doug just needs to come out to Pacey! Why is he hiding it when Pacey can tell something is up?! 8: I knew it! I’m right once again! Good Chapter 9: Dang it! Why are you throwing us around so much?! Good Chapter though! 10: Pacey just gave Doug good advice! It’s a miracle J/K! Good chapter Update soon PLEASE!
tomoya-542002 2006-03-15 ch 10,	abusesquee! wonderful so far, keep up the good work!
tomoya-542002 2006-03-15 ch 8,	abusegrins i like this chapter!
tomoya-542002 2006-03-15 ch 7,	abuseI heart Pacey! it's a wonderful story so far, i like it alot!
ReRe04 2006-03-08 ch 1,	abuseI think I just found a new for me Jack/Doug story. Woo hoo! :) Can't wait to read more of it.
Sam Cdn 2006-02-02 ch 10,	abuseI am so happy you updated! This was a very well-done chapter. I thought you definitely did a good job of making Doug more likeable. I really hope (especially with Pacey's help now) that those two will be able to work it out ASAP so that we can get more hot Jack/Doug action! Pacey was great, except for one thing: he thinks Doug should wait around for Jack to apologize? NO! Doug's gotta do the apologizing here! Oh well. Awesome chapter; I hope we get more soon. -Sam
Kyra 2006-02-02 ch 10, anon.	abuseThis is such a fab story please keep writing it.
Solomsiah 2006-02-02 ch 10, anon.	abuseHoly crap, you updated! More like fantastic than weird, though. ^^ Marvelous, even. I can't wait until you do it again.
MadScientistGirl 2006-02-01 ch 10,	abuseI loved this chapter. I am so glad that Doug has become less of a jerk! My favorite line has to be "Either you two have been sleeping together, or you've managed to have a lifetime's worth of relationship stages in about a month." Love it. It is always interesting to see how other people see the Doug/Jack relationship starting. It is so different from what I had immagined, but I can so see this scenario happing as well as what is running aroudn in my head. Now that Doug has come out to Pacey, maybe he can apologise and get together with Jack soon. I hope! Anyways-I love it and hope you keep updating the story cuase I really want to see more of where this is going.
abby 2005-11-15 ch 9, anon.	abusegood job hurry with next one!
MadScientistGirl 2005-08-10 ch 9,	abuseLove this chapter. It started out so intense, and then Doug gets all freaky. Love it. It does make me want to go hit Doug over the head for doing that to jack. I love the 2 empty glasses image!
Sam Cdn 2005-08-08 ch 9,	abuseArgh, Doug! The beginning of this chapter was so happy and delicious (Jack and Doug waking up together ... what could be better?), but the ending was so tragic and bitter. Realistic, though, as well: it was totally like Jack to react that way to Doug's revelation that he would not tell his brother about them and himself. And I think that Jack was justified in his reaction as well. I liked this: "Finally, his roving eyes looked through the glass door and rested on the two empty glasses out on the picnic table, their edges rimmed with frost. They stood there, standing tall and close together." I thought that it was a striking image, and perfect to have Jack gazing at the glasses after the argument. I also thought the detail of the frost on the edges of the glasses really genius. Update soon! -Sam
bonny 2005-08-08 ch 9,	abuseI love the story, please,please continue soon. =O)

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