I love it. Although I'm not a real fan of LoVe in FanFic, I really loved this story!

Wow, that was amazing...and very true to the characters and the Logan/Veronica relationship. It was heartbreaking and bittersweet. Great job! :)

I love the realness that happens in this. I'm sick of Logan and Veronica being completely happily ever after, because they never were and it's not true to character. Like Logan once said... they don't write songs about the easy ones. Anyway - this was fabulous. Well done.

im a bit confused by this story. from your little intro at the beginning, if i am reading it correctly, you are saying that just like Duncan thought in that Ep that Veronica is indeed his sister. Thats why Celeste reminds her of the contract she signed, when V is there during Duncans party. So when the kid comes out looking just like Lily, it just confirming that Veronica is a Kane? and thats why she gets the knot in her throat thinking about the one time with duncan cuase now she knows for sure it was incest.? Someone else commented suggesting the baby was Duncans, but i read the story as if V was a Kane, and that although the baby looked like Lily, it was still Logan's. baby looking like Lily was just genetics of Veronica being the one who is a Kane. i wish someone would clarify that for me

Wow, I´m just speechless, this is really really, completely amazing and beautiful, I loved it!!

Sad, sweet, and beautiful!

So good! So sad yet sweet! I'm going through your stories reading them b/c they ROCK! I'm always craving good VM fics! Lovely imagery and good dialogue and a cool idea. :)

HURRY UP AND WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!I AM DYING OF ANTICIPATION!

PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

I loved it! it was amazing! Really please write another chapter. PLease!

Wow! That was beautiful! It was perfect for the subject matter - emotional without being cheesy.

I've read this twice and I loved every second of it. Beautiful, bittersweet, and extremely well written. Lovely characterization of both Veronica and Logan. Great fic!!

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Beautifully done. Different, heartbreaking and uplifting in the end. I hope you decide to write more LoVe in the future.

I just was to reiterate what others have said. This story was beautiful and angsty! Logan and Veronica broke my heart. I thought your charaterization of them both was spot on. I could totally see them being like this in the future. I am very glad that the heartbreak came to an end by the end of the story. You did an awesome job. I like how Logan jumped away from Veronica when she placed his hand on her stomach. You could just tell how scared he was about screwing up the child's life, just like how his life had been screwed up by his parents. I especially found it heartbreaking that he wanted Veronica to protect their child from becoming Lilly. Keep up the fabulous writing. I love Logan/Veronica fics, there is so much potential for their characters.