Argh! Why am I so behind on reading your stories! *runs around in circles. trips on a pizza and a snail. falls* Anyway, awesome story!

Em

Not bad, I saw the katana coming a mile away. I was kinda hoping you'd go with a Kodachi, seems much more appropriate considering Ayeve's character.
Though this has now left me wondering...what would be the result of a fight between Link and Ayeve.
Well enough of my rambling. Ciao for now!

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Wow this is a great fic, please keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter :)

LJ

Now that, was some dense plot twists. Or maybe I'm reading too much into all the possibilities this chapter opened up. Either way, this fic promises to get pretty interesting pretty soon.
Well, don't have too much to say at the moment so I'll end it here before I go off on a tangeant. Good work, nice plot twists. I shall look forward to the next chapter. Ciao for now!

^_^~Tis has been a message from your unfriendly neighborhood LunaticChaos~^_^

Not bad, not bad at all. A pretty good story so far. Though the thing with Ayeve is a little on the blunt side. Nice characterization for Link by the way, that does sound like what little we know of his personality. I'll look forward to the next chapter. Ciao for now!

Well to help answer the Bastard Sword thing, if I'm correct it's because of the fact the sword can easily be used with either one hand or two hands, it's basically a design between a longsword and a broadsword, the bastard son if you will of those two designs.

Nicely done, I guess I'm not the only one bringing the Pheonix into the Zelda Universe at the moment. Well then, off to the next chapter.

Awesome chapter. Sorry I didn't read it sooner. School is a pain and keeps me really busy. Anyway, keep up the good work. I'll read chapter 2 soon.

Em

You write very well. I was entertained the entire time I was reading. Very few people can write as well as you. Please keep up the excellant work and update soon. I would love to see how this story goes.

Ah, the wonders of a good summery to pull people in.

That aside, I loved this! From the first paragraph, it pulled me in! The setting, character development, introduction of the phoenixes, and the pacing (poeple have trouble with this the most) is completely excellent!

In fact, I'm adding this to my favorites! And it's only one chapter! And a short one, too, but wonderfully done!

A nice start, good job.

Hm...
Poor Link, he's seen little in the way of true magical beauty.
He'll run into a phoenix, right?