Great job. I absolutely love it so far and cannot wait to read the rest.

I enjoyed that :) I don't often read fics about Obi-Wan - truth be told he's one of my least-favourite characters - but you managed to make me like him for the duration of your fic, so well done!

I hope you update & complete it, but I know it's been a while since your last chapter. Even if you don't finish it, thanks for writing!

I went back through and read the whole thing today... please say you're not done with it! This is one of my all time faves, and I'm desperate to know why she goes back in time again! I do so love your Obi-Wan... sigh.

want more!

I found this chapter seemed short, though it wasn't necessarily short. Oh well, its still a chapter!
hope the next chapters out soon!

I found this story today... And I couldn't stop reading it... I can't see now, anymore, except a blurry screen.

This is a fabulous story..and I don't want Kye-Li to leave or Obi-Wan to die as he did in the canon.. Yeah, I threw my two eents in. LOL Oh I can't wait till they have their daughter either.

This is so sweet that Obi-Wan found love and Kye-Li did too. The interaction between the two is really AWESOME. Damn, this whole story is AWESOME...

It's just a fascinating story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I hope you update SOON! :)

Intriguing. Wonder what will happen to her.

Woah, woah, woah... what do u mean YET?! please tell that she'd dies toward the end...ok now you've got me... UPDATE SOON!!

Ah those midi chlorians. Wouldn't it be awesome if we could have some of that? So since the organisms were the midi cholrians, what was the poison? or is that not relevant?
I think Kye Li is jealous of Caryis... well of course she would! Any other women who looks at her man is a potential threat, and if she knew obi wan before then thats not good.

No she cant die. Aww...its so sad yet I cant stop reading it. Its awesome.

Cliff hangers. What can you say about them?

Oh geez, its fight time!

Oh the anticipation! (I probably sound like a dork but i don't care.)

Yes do carry on.

I haven't been able to read your story in the longest time. So sorry! Then I couldn't find the story and I finally did. Ah..yay..bliss. Awesome chapter!