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Reviews For: Colder When It's Over

John Ashford
2006-11-12
ch 1,
abuseDUDE WRITE ABOUT ALEXIA WE ALREADY KNOW ABOUT ALFRED. ALEXIA! ALEXIA! ALEXIA! ALEXIA! ALEXIA! ALEXIA! ALEXIA!
Moi
2006-05-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's so one-shot, yet...
AimzNemesis
2006-02-28
ch 1,
abuse:) I really like this. Beautiful, ever-so-slightly twisted, sad and well-written. This is going on my Favourites List.
Sir Pent
2005-09-20
ch 1,
abusedear (what's ur name again)

in regards to you review on one of my stories asking "who's Nikki'

Nikkin is in fact one of the people who own's this accounts little brother

nikki has a little bit of a temper tantrum and doesn't find it amusing when you call him booferty ronie or mention his love of selby and horrible history books

he is also learning to play the drums

he's not very good but on the upside, the dod peeded on one of the drums and then the cat rolled in it

good day
Chantay
2005-09-02
ch 1,
abusenasty and romantic at the same time.
T-VeronicaAlexiaAshford
2005-07-26
ch 1,
abuseAww love him... I love this story
Caleb Nova
2005-06-15
ch 1,
abuseAn excellently written look at a rather twisted relationship. A rather bold move on your part, attempting to capture something so darkly incestous. Well done.
Dee
2005-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI could do without the parentheses, but I really did enjoy the story. The summary itself held a twisted yet heartwrenching prospect and the story delivered on all that. I really like the details you've included about his handwriting, the mirror, and the unopened letters. I hope you keep writing.
wolfgirl16
2005-06-09
ch 1,
abuseAw...That was both sad and beautiful. You most definately have a way with words.
Shakahnna
2005-06-04
ch 1,
abuseAww that is kinda sad actually, makes me feel really sorry for Alfred, poor wee muffin that he is. You get over well how unhappy he was at the events and is endearing and touching to see his loyalty towards her. I just wonder if she got them would she even care?

This really was lovely, like there was definitely a twisted element in it but still, a peculiar brand of adoreable.
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