I love it. The character interactions were perfect.

I liked it alot. Much of the two characters' personalities was captured in your writing...and it was very well written

^.^ as well as sexy...hehe

Squee! This was just what I needed this morning.

I really enjoyed this story. Jack and Daniel are really in character and the plot is so well thought out! Really realistic! I could almost believe it was canon!!
Best wishes and keep up the good work!!

I absolutely adore this story! It has probably THE most realistic Jack/Daniel storyline that I've ever seen. Which is saying something considering that I've read almost every one of those on The title in itself is interesting as you brought it up early in the story. And the action and slight mystery about the bodies covered in lava was paticular exciting and I think that you have the mysterious natives down to a tee. All in all an excellent story that I would love to see more of! Great job and keep up the awesome work!