Heyy, it certainly looks like you won't be updating this story anymore, but I thought I'd let you know I absolutely LOVE this story. You write beautifully and the characters are spot on. This story is amazing; it could go really far. I wish you would continue. Anyway, best of luck to you and your writing! I hope you find time to continue this awesome adventure. :]

Wow! I'm not really sure how I found this fic, but I was really enjoying what you had written so far. It looks like you've stopped updating, but I think that if you decided to continue it some day some people would definitely be interested in it. The characterization is nice and the romance elements are strong. Overall, some nice writing. Cheers!

Aww, nuts...

I was really enjoying reading this fic. It's been almost 8 months now and it still haven't been updated. It's too bad because it was a decent fic.

*sobs* I'm so sad.. This story is soo good... and I'm guessing it will never be finished. ;__; Man.. damn! This story is AWESOME. *SIGH* Ah... well.. keep up the good work with whatever else you decide to write. You rule.

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I love it so far. It's clear and detailed, but it doesn't come off as pretentious or overwritten--it's obvious the story cares about its characters. I'm also glad it's not afraid to (tastefully) explore some more mature issues. I'll look forward to reading more of this.

AAre you gonna update? And what about the brood in that part of the world? Will they met the light and dark dragons? Or are you going to have them all destroyed?

oh my god!! this was an awesome story!1 please contihue it!! , how is it that this story has been hidden from me this past year that i've been registered on i love the way you made the char stay in ... umm ... uh ... char? .. well anyways , please continue making such greta stories!! but before you do that please finish this one , I must know what happens next and the Finale!! thank you for you time and i bid you good health! adieu!! (you deserve a salute! *gives you a very military salute*)

i like where you are going with this. you are doing a good job and i hope u keep it up dont get too disheartened you have a great idea

... Did you know that this is the second fic I've read where Rei accidentally sees Momo naked?

Anyway, the premise sounds interesting, and I like the description of the reunion with Teepo in the prologue. Hope you continue.

I could have sworn I reviewed this already. Anyway great stuff hope to see more. Be more discriptive don't tell use what happend show us what happend.