Your stories are great! This one got me through a very boring car ride, so thank you!

Great story. love it

that was so sweet!

This was my fav episode in the show. I'm glad you wrote it the way you did.

Hey, nice story ;)

That was SUPER! :) I loved Lois's internal struggle of right and wrong and how everything turned out, such as Lois's confession to Martha and Clark. Bravo!

Nice job! Way to slightly alter the episode and yet stay true to the dialogue.

I like this version on how Lois finds out Clark's secret, perhaps it would have been much more fun for the two if the secret had been found out in the first season.

Great story.

Fun to see Lois' mental processes at work as she tries to work out her desire to prove herself vs. her ethics.

I'm just wondering why none of the comments she made to Clark about Clark vs. Superman, etc. entered the picture?