|Reviews for A legend reborn|
| Wonderbee31 1/8/10 . chapter 30
Wow, I almost can't believe it's all done here, and really enjoyed how it played out, with a Ranma/Kasumi/Nabiki triangle that worked out great, and that the three of them are happy together. Well done, and looking forward to more of your works in the upcoming year.
| Rune Tobor 1/8/10 . chapter 30
While there are some good stories that are incomplete, the best are the complete ones. Real life has enough problems that I like to see happy endings. And you gave us one, thanks. You even left a hook for a book two if anyone wants to write it. The adventures of the kids and the story of how his daughters became female super saiyans. This is an AWESOME story and I'll likely reread it several times.
Once again congratulations and thanks for a great story. Thanks for writing, I wish I was one tenth as good.
| Dumbledork 1/8/10 . chapter 30
Yay. Happy end. Good job. Have you any plans for the side story?
| Vilkath 1/8/10 . chapter 30
Well I don't really know what to say about this chapter or fic as a whole. I was over all a bit disapointed it ended, not that it was particularly bad ending or anything but it just turned over the years into one the good stories you hope never ends. Also as the rather anoying incident with Happosai some how cursing Ranma female happend around chapter 23 or something that incited the rewrite/split of this story the author was actualy willing to rethink an idea and rewrite it, a very rare thing in both fanfiction and real life that any author willing to admit they may of made a plot mistake to the degree of changing it. So the author cares, and the story was actualy completed, a lot more then most DBZ cross over stories can claim.
Honestly despite the popluarity of DBZ cross overs, especialy in Ranma fanfiction I think this is one the few stories on a very short list that actualy complete, and longer then one or two chapter short crack fic.
I loved the intial idea, and I liked many the ways Ranma and the cast got stronger, I especaly liked the final arc in Hell and such since it deviated well away from both canon Dragon ball and Ranma plots, something almot all DBZ fics follow way to closely. I will say the ending seemed come out of no where though and had a real 'and they lived happily ever after' feel to it. With all time spent on how cool, powerful and mystical Ranma's new armor was, how advanced and strange the race of mystical aliens who ascended to the relm of Kami where I really did not expect story just go 'poof' and end.
It just felt like a young King Arthur finding excalibur, greatest sword in all of england, and then retiring from battle to open a fish and chips shop using the sword to cut vegetables before he even faught any one. To be honest it seemed like the author was well onto going into another story arc, lost their drive or idea and just tacked on a 'happily ever after' to the chapter in progress. Which while anoying I can at least say is nicer to their readers then leaving a fic incomplete.
I kind hope this story has a sequal, I could easily see what Ranma had done elevated him above normal 'mortal' levels and perhaps gave him an ageless imortality. A healing factor that survives things like Ranma did does not lend itself to dying of old age imo, so perhaps a sad Ranma who lived longer then his wives, perhaps kids, grand kids etc could enter a new cross over universe and what not. A strong powerful setting would be a must so Ranma wouldn't have to suddenly be weakend or something cliche like that. The DC or Marvel universe probably best fit DBZ levels of fighting imo.
| Drifter950 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Thank you for a very good story. Even better, it's just as good in the rereads (flaky memory, reread whole story when updating, better to understanding you with, my dear).
I hope the "Endgame" just means the end of an arc. You have set up you universe so completely that it almost begs for more adventures, specially family affairs.
Ranma's comment of "damn magical girls", just begs that he finds his Ladies are latent ones. Makes his family adventures with Kasumi and Nabiki even better. More so if their kids inherit from both sides. (Evil grin) The pictures of them in my mind as they "play" with grandpa Genma are just ... yeah! (EVEN MORE EVIL) Their cousins joining in, with the parents standing on the sidelines (to make sure he doesn't get away). Please include this if/when you add to the "A Legend Reborn".
At almost 60 you would think that last comment should feel so wrong, but Dragon Ball and Ranma .5 are I and my kids combination fanfic favorites. I'll bet I'm not the only reader that hopes you continue.
Your letting Ranma "kick butt, and take names" is special to me. Takahashi's inability to let Ranma find any lengthy peace or love irritated my whole family. We think owning both anime series gives us the right to bitch and growl.
Again thanks for the good read.
May the MUSE always be with you!
| Tangent 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Been a hell of a ride.
Sad to see it end, but on the other hand I don't see what other challenges you could put before Ranma at this point that he wouldn't severely overpower.
Looking forward to your next story! :D
| slaaneshgod 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Wow an amazing and quite fitting end to one of your excellent stories. I would like to know what happens with the restructuring of hell but hey its still good. I have to say I am glad you decided not to tackle gt because the power levels at the end of Z are staggering especially in your version and gt is too contrived to begin with. Thanks you for your excellent writing and I hope to see more of betrayel's reward from you soon.
| Anubis of The Highway Thieves 1/7/10 . chapter 30
This was a great story.
| ArmorOfGeddon 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Cheers, bro! Its been truly epic and you deserve it! Hope to see more from you in the future even if the stories take another four years!
| firelordeg 1/7/10 . chapter 30
wow has it really been 4 1/2 years incredible thank you for sharing this wonderful story both glad and sad to see it end but it was a fantastic read thank you
| Kithrin 1/7/10 . chapter 30
um... what happened to the amazons? last i heard they were still trying for ranma.
| Ranma2387 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Great Finish to this Extreamly Interesting Fanfic.
I hope you can finish the fanfic Chaotic Rebirth becasue i found that one quite amusing.
| Jokulmorder 1/7/10 . chapter 30
WOOTs, and we're all hoping you'll return to assertively writing, "Betrayal's Reward" looks especially ripe.
| Foxsoul 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Congrats on finishing off a great story.
| Dragon Man 180 1/7/10 . chapter 30
Nice wrap up, though I do wish you could have shown us Bluma meeting Och'Tar'Un, that would have been interesting. Awesome fights, very well done. Ranma's new armor and sword rock, nice modifications!