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| Sicaria 2008-07-19 ch 7,  | abuseVery promising start & a original plotline. Please update soon. Sicaria |
| SisterFreaks 2008-07-17 ch 7, anon. | abuseHey! Where's the rest of the story. This concept of Naruto is one I haven't seen before. You should continue onward. |
| Sara Chan-san 2008-07-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseI know life gets in the way, or maybe you don't feel inspired by this story anymore, but I just wanted to let you know that I still check every now and again if this story's been updated. I really enjoyed reading what you have so far. Please continue writing and keep up the good work! Thanks. =] |
| PancakeMixLordOfPantopia 2008-06-16 ch 2, | abuseOh will there be yaoi? |
| PancakeMixLordOfPantopia 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abusePlease update whole story! I command it! |
| UsagiLovesDuochan 2008-06-07 ch 7, | abuseAw, damn, the last update has been ages ago. You are not by any chance considering to continue this story? I stumbled upon it by accident and I have to admit in the beginning I just wanted to know what happened to Naruto that makes him not acting loud anymore. I was not really 100% interested into the story, but after I started reading I found myself glued to the page and now you've got my whole interest. This story is well done so far and very interesting. I especially love the SasuNaru moments. And it's nice to see that Sakura decided to grow up a little earlier than in the manga. ^^ I have to tell you, in the beginning I hated Sakura's guts but since the middle of the Chuuning exam I started to like her and by now I LOVE her just as much as I love Naruto and Sasuke. ^^ So, well done job with the story so far and I hope you might consider to continue this after all. Best wishes Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^ยด\ |
| Blue Lone Wolf 2574 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseHoly stinkin' crap! For a while, you had me thinkin' that he'd be raped but I guess that getting your throat slashed is just as bad. Talk about harsh. From what I can tell, the only issues I have with this is your lacking ability to use proper grammer so instead of 'Naruto struggles', it should be 'Naruto struggled'. And how long did you write this? Two, three pages? My first chapters are at least eight compared to this! A little disappointing but I'll let it slide. Hopefully the other chapters are longer. Ja ne, Blue |
| Selonianth 2008-05-19 ch 7, | abuseMORE PLEASE |
| Kuma In Pink 2008-05-16 ch 7, | abuseAmazing story! update soon, please? |
| Vixen Uchiha 2008-04-14 ch 7, | abuseum, I love this please update soon |
| Inarae 2008-04-13 ch 7, | abuseHeh. I didn't expect to like this fic (didn't think Naruto being quiet would change the plot that much) but you're right, it really does. I like what you've done with the plot--it's different enough to keep me guessing, which I really like. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
| Iztiak 2008-03-05 ch 7, | abuseAlright, I've been wondering. Is this story really going to be Yaoi, or just a misunderstanding? I'd prefer the misunderstanding, I don't really like to read yaoi. Anyway, good luck with your writing. Iztiak |
| firefox11 2008-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abusehey are you going to finish this? i hope you do i like the idea of sasuke caring for naruto! couled you PLEASE update?! im sure there are other people who want you to countinue. I think this is one of the best fic's i'v ever read! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! |
| Soul-Girl 2008-02-03 ch 7, | abuseI know you haven't updated in a while but I hope you can finish the story ^ ^ |
| Moria Le Fay 2008-01-21 ch 7, | abuseeagerly awaiting the next chapter i love the plot and it is writen well with no spelling or grammer errors that i could see |