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Jolly
2007-11-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseMAKE

ANOTHER!

XD


I love this couple and i can never find ones good enough but ya know, you just made this my favirote fanfiction in the WORLD!
Fiery Goddess of Ice
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseGreat little ficlet! I wish it was longer though :sigh:
I just started reading YYH fanfics a week ago and when I started looking for them I thought 'There are heaps of YYH fics that I've seen around the place, there must be loads of Yusuke/Kuwabara fics' because if you ask me they seem to be the most cannon pairing (apart from the whole Yukina and Keiko thing). But then I found that most of the yaoi fics are Kiei/Kurama, and I was like 'What the hey? What about the poor lonely main character over here?!'
:sigh: maybe its just me... well, sorry for ranting to you, I really liked this fic! (another Yusu/Kuwa! Hoorah!)
^_^
kazumigirl
2005-12-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat fic! Loved it!
anonymous
2005-11-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseyou're a good writer.
anime manga girl
2005-07-10
ch 1,
abuseThis story was great (as always)!

There isn't enough of this pairing writen!

I have an idea for a Yusuke/Kuwabara pairing but I'm sure about how to write it! I only have the bare plot down too...
Shi Rurouni of the Aphrodes...
2005-06-21
ch 1,
abuse::glomps you:: I seem to be doing this alot lately.

It wasn't quite what I expected, but it was still good.

::grins pervertedly:: alone, in the art room, with their teenaged, hormonal driven minds...ah, I do so LOVE Yu Yu Hakusho!
Aseret Kitsune
2005-06-17
ch 1,
abusegreat fic! and you're right, this is a rare pairing.
Kazima Kuwabara
2005-06-17
ch 1,
abuse...i just keep picturing a student saying, "teacher this desk is sticky..." *bursts into laughter* I love this.
hyperdude
2005-06-12
ch 1,
abuseEnjoy it? ENJOY IT?! THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME! I cant see that YUuske's character is that exaggerated, because I can imagine him beating around the bush. Just keep writing, and never stop. Your stories are ALWAYS good, and dont let ayone else tell you otherwise.
Ryuuie Mizishi
2005-06-07
ch 1,
abuseXD
I loved that, and a citrusy sequel would be great, but I'm sure I can use my imagination. I think. Awesomeness, through and through, and I really enjoyed it. There aren't many good YusukeXKuwabara stuffs out there to read, so I'm glad you wrote one. You fics are so cool!
Ainohimitsu
2005-06-03
ch 1,
abuseO.O I enjoyed this VERY much! o^.^o

Well, the first word that came to my mind as I read this delicious piece of skillfully written writing of yours was passionate. ^.^; I bet you knew that was coming. :D I can't help it... that's how I percieve your writing style...and I'm absolutely addicited! ^.^; that sounds wrong...

Hmm...in your a/n...I liked how you explained your reasons for writing the different pairings... and I must agree with you for the most part. ^.^

And I don't believe I was really focused on the imagery and lack of detail, as you put it, but caught up in the emotion...the temptation...the seduction...Argh! I know what I'm trying to say... so please bear with my rambling ^.^;...

Anyway, what I think I'm trying to say is that...this is so much like Yusuke...at least to me... he seems like one who is caught up in the moment...running on pure emotion...impulsive... and determined in the sense that he goes for what he wants...and actually makes sure he gets it...and you portrayed this amazingly well. ~.^

And I must admit this is such a strangely awesome pairing that I've become somewhat addicted to.

I kind of percieve Kuwabara as innocent and naieve...why? well...that is hard to explain... and I don't really think I could... but that's how you seemed to show the him through Yusuke's eyes...along with his high morale...

Well, I guess I shall leave you with three questions...

1. I find it interesting that you seem to compare Kuwabara to and orange...whether by the taste of his lips...or his scent...would you share with me your reason for this? You don't have to...I'm just being curious. ^.^

2. I notice that you often use art in your stories... do you like to draw or paint? Again just curious. o^.^o

3. Well, I remembered that you liked Shizuru... or the Hiei/Shizuru coupling in one of the reviews you so kindly gave me (and I cannot even begin to thank you enough...that meant bunches to me) and well I've written a sad one-shot in Shizuru's POV titled "Like the Butterfly" and I was hoping you'd take a look at it when time permits you...that is if you want...it would mean alot to me...just because I really do look up to you as an author...and you are a source of inspiration when I write...

Well, ta ta for now, my dear!

Yo
Retired Kitkat
2005-06-03
ch 1,
abuseYou know, I liked the story just the way it is. I didn't even feel the lack of detail. Also I liked it because you wrote them both so much in character and I have a weak spot for IC. Of course I read OOC, but I still prefer them the more IC as they can be, given the circunstances of the fics.

Congratulations for the story and for the AN, yes for the AN, it was nice to know the reasoning behind your pairings.

Kitkat

PS: I hope to read more Yus/Kuw from you, specially because the pairing (my favourite) deserves more good authors writing it.
kit-kit
2005-06-03
ch 1, anon.
abusei liked it unlike some of your other stories the charcters were to the point in there feelings.
Jovianokamigirl
2005-06-03
ch 1,
abuseOh, I just love Yusuke/Kazuma fics! There great togeother! Please could you make more of Yusuke/Kazuma fics? And could you make just once a Hiei/Kazuma? Please?!
Rowan and Sakura
2005-06-02
ch 1,
abuseRowan: Zelia! I haven't read your stories in so long! *is sad and sorry* I've never read a Yusuke/Kuwabara story before but, par usual, I enjoyed it all the same.
Sakura: Your reasoning for lack of description is understandable and, to be honest, I liked the story as it was.
Rowan: It was interesting to get an insight into your rationale for how the different pairings work and actually very educational! I especially appreciated your reasoning into the Hiei/Yusuke relationship and I must agree; I like to think that they work well because Yusuke can take care of Hiei without being his bodyguard. The Koenma/Yusuke was also helpful, as I'm writing one right now. Now that you mention it, the whole boss-employee thing does add to the appeal.
Sakura: As for the story itself, I loved the banter between them, especially at the beginning when Kuwabara first comes into the scene. Also, the last few lines, especiall when Yusuke says "It didn't go away, Kuwabara,"- that, I think, was my favorite line.
Rowan: Okay, it's the weekend soon, so I'm going to try and catch up with the rest of your stories then, okay? Also, if you have any spare time, could you do me an uberly huge favor and review my YYH story "Serenade"? I really want some constructive criticism on that and I know I can trust you to give that. Anyway, great story!
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