Wow, great so far. Please don't leave us hanging for too long. This has such potential.

Come on muse, inspire her.

good chapter. please update soon!

Oh.. very exciting, I can't wait to see where this is going :-) I don't normally go for OCs but I like these ones :-) Great work!

ow just read this, interesting start...

oh. exciting stuff

Ah, Marie. A familiar face. =) You have a nice buildup for a plot here, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I hope you don't wait until you fall off the front page to update again. =D

uh! i like the charactors you've introduced. pleaz write more soon! ^_^
~HIKARi

Great chapter. Nice cliffhanger too- please update soon.

welcome back stranger :}

nice chapter, but whats with the cliffhanger agin
come on be nice to poor deprived B5`s

big hugs
owlx

Intriguing start. More please

Oh that was just nasty stopping there.
Youve got me curious :}
Please update soon, desperately need a good B5 fix.

love
Owlx

Oh but I am going to enjoy this! Great start, please update soon!

ooh, am ever so curious!
please continue soon; it's nice to have you back!

ta,
pol xo