 mirai3k 2006-04-06 . chapter 1Oh gosh, that was red and gold, through and through!
You're exceptionally talented and it takes quite a bit to write (drunk) Sirius but I think you really got the bitterness straight here. Painful but lovely.
~Mirai |
 celerystalksatmidnight 2005-10-15 . chapter 1You know what? Its true, light doesn't lend itself very well to orgies at all. Now that i think about it, that is probably where i went wrong with my social life. This wasn't a very good review, but i really appreciated the story just the same. |
 link no miko 2005-06-16 . chapter 1Wow. Very very nice. The characterisations of James and Sirius (and the little we saw of Lily--she would be that perceptive, wouldn't she?) were top-notch. Seeing Sirius drunk off his rocker was an alarming change of pace, but he still -felt- like Sirius, even if he didn't act like him.
I want to give him a hug.
I thought I had read this on your lj (was it even posted there...? Memory equals sieve) but halfway through I was all "Uh, don't remember this. Whee!" and continued reading.
I loved the inclusion of the title halfway through the fic--not at beginning or end, but halfway. It stood out more that way.
The one thing though was I was confused for the longest time about what Sirius was talking about (I lose at names), but then I figured I was supposed to be so I just went with it. And by the end I was all "O~oh. Now I get it" and such. So rawr for Fichan!
Thank you for this ficcie! *hugs* It was a lovely (if sad) glimpse into the past. |
 personthingy 2005-06-03 . chapter 1Aw... He still loves his blood brother. There are some things that just can't be helped. And I like that about James being Sirius's real brother. That was sweet. |
 HonestlyDishonest 2005-06-03 . chapter 1wow, that was really good!! i hope you continue to write some more stories! great job! |
 saintsonelight 2005-06-03 . chapter 1Well done! The concept was excellent, and I think that you revealed some important truths while Sirius was drunk. It was well written and I enjoyed it immensely. Again, well done, and I hope to see more of your writing. |
 daemoninwhite 2005-06-03 . chapter 1Very nice. Nice, sorta fluffy story. I must admit, it would be sad if your brother was kiled by your worst enemy, and it was his fault. Ok, I'm rambeling. See ya and please write more stories soon! |
 jojo 2005-06-03 . chapter 1 loved it u go! moving |
 Mooncheese 2005-06-03 . chapter 1*Sniff* That was really, really, really sad. I don't know why, exactly, but something about Sirius's slurred, crude words got me right *slaps chest* here. I mean, no matter how much you hate your brother you still grew up with him...and when Sirius said “Whereza party? There’s always a party here Cris’mas Eve.” That was so childlike and so...drunk. Poor Sirius. *Sniff* |
 Tuatha de Danaan 2005-06-03 . chapter 1Really good and terribly sad. |
 sna 2005-06-02 . chapter 1Oh well done Phoenix! I really liked this one, it was a quiet, not particularly demonstrative take on Sirius's reaction to Regulus's death (which so *obviously* bothered him in OotP) and I liked it very much. The last line was sweet and sad, and Sirius's realization that he could have killed his little brother and not realized it over the previous few months was a great touch.
Well done you, at any rate. : )
sna |