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Melverne
2009-11-09 . chapter 7
This is an excellent story. Dumbledore is in his typical manipulative Headmaster role. The twist is him coaching Neville to be the savior of the wizarding world. It will be interesting to see how this turns out. Neville has already lost two fingers and has a scar to show for it so far.

There was a big shake up in the Merlin house from the first to second year. They were a closer group when they shared quarters. Separating them into their host houses has contributed to their alienation. It is understandable why the Merlin crest title was abandoned.

Thanks for sharing
-Melverne
Miishii
2009-11-08 . chapter 14
I have read both stories of Blind Faith and am so far entranced. I love how well you Integrated Harry's so-seeming disability into the story and thus changed the way of things. I ESPECIALLY enjoy how you fixed up Dudly and must say it was completely ingenious! Petunia is hilarious and I love how she frightens everybody so efficiently.
Hermoine and Draco are a smart match and it is rather humorous that Draco gets so flustered over her. Why, I suspect she would remain painfully oblivious to the point of nearly driving the poor Malfoy/Black heir mad. He'd most likely have to practically jump her for her to realize he likes her. Nearly speculation on my part just because Hermoine, while proud of herself and filled with enough emotion and confidence to be a great seductress, lacks the ability to see when people are practically falling over themselves for her more romantically focused attentions.
Luna is awesome and I bet she knows that she is really speaking backwards, most likely loves to string people along. All the more to her, I say. Being normal is highly over rated.
Can't wait for you to update as I am practically biting my nails to see how this will continue, and all the more hope for Harry to slip up again and call Petunia 'mum' you can tell she wants him to...
P.S. Neville's a Prat and Ginny seems misguided. THough I must say that I don't want either to die. Where would the fun and intrigue though if the characters fueling dislike amongst the readers disappear. A little conflict never did anyone too much outlandish damage...just little flesh wounds really...

Love your work and hope to read more,
~ Miishii
jonayla
2009-11-06 . chapter 14
Great story! really great, just one tiny little question (A). when are you going to update?? I can't wait to read the hole story but I'll need updates for that (A) hope you'll continue with the story...
Midori Heiwa
2009-10-22 . chapter 14
please update it been nearly a year.
V4mp1r3 L0v3r
2009-10-11 . chapter 14
Please please please update soon! This is such a good fic, it's too good to just be abandoned!!
Eclips-MoonShadowRadiance
2009-10-10 . chapter 14
“So your second son will be Black heir... I'd better warn Hermione when she wakes up...” fml you have some funny shit in here. Great story i love it so far, i find it so funny that you reversed Neville's and Dudley's personalities. And the fact that Voldemort is secretly draining Neville's 'powers' to 'come back' from the 'dead' is really interesting, and quite smart. However, i'm assuming that it all went down the drain when Ginny got rid of the diary. And you decided to bring in Sirius early, i'm looking forward to how Harry will react to Black's innocence, all in all, you've got me hooked.

;) i'm looking forward to your update, btw you can tyt updating, i've got a ton of other fanfics that need attending too =P...seriously =.='

Shika XD
jesusfreak100percent
2009-10-07 . chapter 14
Please continue this story soon! It's amazing! I couldn't stop reading it - staying up till all hours of the night (in my second biggest exam year) just for your story!
Les Dowich
2009-10-07 . chapter 14
Okay, I have been patient and waited for the update but it hasn't arrived yet. Any chanced of it happening soon? Your writing is good, too good to abandon so unceremoniously. So, make a greedy boy happy and update soon, very soon... pretty please, with sugar on top!
abbyagapao
2009-09-27 . chapter 14
this is such a good story, please update soon.
Chaos Dragon-Fox
2009-09-20 . chapter 14
I am loving this! I first saw 'Blind Faith' and i thought it was rather awesome and just jumped straight into reading the sequel. I am also going to read the story that inspired you to write this as well!
Neumzie
2009-09-12 . chapter 14
um, im just going to say this now, where the hell are you? i didnt even want to read these stories because you haven't updated in A YEAR, but i did anyway. this is why i dont read incomlete stories! now this is a damn good story/series, so why dont you update? you said you were playing World of Warcraft, but that doesnt take up a year! come on! you have lots of fuckin people waiting on this story, it seems; why dont you AT LEAST put out the 2nd half of the chapter?!...
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MATTHEW MURDOCK!? lmfao nice Daredevil reference!...
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yea, see, point proven; i want to see them visit sirius! as im sure EVERYONE ELSE does, too! come on, please!
PrettyFanGirl
2009-09-10 . chapter 14
I can not wait for an update! Are you still on this, taking a break? I really love this story, it is very unique, well written, cliche free, and well thought out. Please update soon!
Neumzie
2009-09-09 . chapter 7
god, i love TrustIssues! harry lol. but why not gryffindor? i love that team, with wood and the weasley twins. they really were great.
Neumzie
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
typos: in the first one, he was blinded when he was 4, not 5. also, you mentioned that his eyes WERE green in the first one, not gray. and dont you keep your eye color, it just turns kind of milky or unfocused? ive been a blind woman, and her eyes were blue, you could tell thet they used to be blue, but they had just kind of fogged over.

what did they bet on? that hedwig would come back? lol
Ptronille
2009-09-03 . chapter 14
Ah, it's really too bad this story's has been discontinued; but maybe you'll update someday ? After all it's not unheard of for authors to update a year later...
Anyway, if you decided to abandon the story, then please, please don't leave us readers hanging onto false hopes... Sorry; just read your profile, apparently you DIDN'T give up ! So I'm not giving up either, and I'll just wait for the next chapter.
Although, if I may ask you, what is it that's blocking you ? The next chapter ? Or is it that you don't like the way you write ?
See you soon... I hope ? :P
Clem
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