i thought this was awesome! somthing different for the CR section. but doesn't a haiku go in the order of 5 syllables, 7 syllables then 5 again? because you were missing a few someimtes
But other than that great good! keep writing. can't wait to see more of your work

"Meh" Indeed; this was a definite waste of time. This was about as Japanese as a fortune cookie.