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| .jc.loves. 2007-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseaww how sweet/sad!!i loved this story it was so good. |
| Mara152 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseThe amount of emotion in this story is phenomenal. It's absolutely beautiful. |
| Heather McFey 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abusefantastic story, really well written. well done! |
| Tony Dessler 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseVery good |
| Jillybean 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's lovely. *beams* |
| Xandra73 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseYou're trying to break my heart, don't you? I can't even put in words how much I love this one. The telephone call is absolutely heart wrenching. Just thinking about the situation Jack's in makes me want to cry. And I can't say often enough how much I love your stories. :) |
| stocktonwood 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abusebeautifully sad fic. you made me cry. i loved the bit where tony could see the gesture jack makes. brilliant. |
| bert05 2005-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abusewow... heartwrenching. good job. You are by far my fav 24 writer. |
| xoleanderx 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, it made me really sad. I feel absolutely horrible for Jack, imagine, everyone thinks you're dead. You can never see your daughter ever again and you can never know your grandson. I'm depressed after reading this, but it's a good depressed, because that means that it's a very very good fic. I loved Tony's hesitation, wanting to find an excuse to not call Jack, and not telling him that he was going to have a child. And Jack's emotions were great, though we only could see Tony's point of view, you could see Jack's face, happy, yet extremely sad, collasping on the couch as his legs gave out. Great, great job! |
| Muskoka Girl 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWow... this was amazing...it was so descriptive and so beautifully written, I could see all of it, Tony sitting in a garden, trying not to call Jack... I could even hear Jack's worried voice. You know at first I thought it was Audrey who was having the baby, but it makes more sense with Kim. Oh and Yay for Tony and Michelle. |
| Airam4u 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseNice story... I loved your imagery and your description of the depth of what they must be feeling. Thank you for sharing! |
| AliciaFB 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, I can't even find good words for describing this. I liked it, it tied the aftermath up a little and it was emotional at the time, too. Very well written. |
| janedoe85 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* That was *sniff* beautiful. Seriously, I'm crying over here... I can't see that happening any other way. It was perfect. |
| Almeida24T 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome, i loved it. |
| mav32 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseYOU ALMOST MADE ME CRY! No but seriously, great job. I never really realized how hard it would be for Jack to be all alone like that. You did a good job capturing it. And i like how Tony is there to be his friend. again, great job! |