Robin really is caught, isn't she? This captures her inner conflict well.

a fundamental paradox that affects most religions. nice job

Your style with brief lines per paragraph really fits the story here, I think. And the end is sort of startling. Pretty cool concept. I could imagine Robin having these sort of questions. Very cool fic.

I like it. You've "voiced" what Robin would be probably asking right now, perhaps 'has been asking'.

Thanks for making this piece.

Not badly written, but there was no need to write almost exclusively one-liner paragraphs. Also I think it's pretty clear from episode 4 that Robin was in no way a religiuos fanatic.

wow... me likes.

kinda similar to the way i write.

not really a flame on christians. i am after all, one myself. only one who is ultra conservative on the matter might be offended, but i dont believe they would even watch WHR in the first place. so i believe youre OK.

By the way, are you one person or a group?

i saw youre homepage.

well, the Arcanis pic is cool. i just really hated the guy on Magic Battlegrounds for X-Box (he always counterspells everything.)

well, dont suppose you could R&R my only story, untouchable? it has a single magic element in it.

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