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Yumemi
2008-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH MY GOD PURE GENIUS
(this was the exact thought, word for word, that passed through my head after reading the story.)

I'm really proud of you.
It was time someone finally admitted that Kakashi and Iruka would never quite work, no matter how cute or sweet it might the pair might seem.
You have this way of making your stories seem so completely...real.
And the endings always seem to be so perfect.
You awe me.
Thank you for existing.
Animeaddict666
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseThank you. This pairing is ick, but I love what you did with this. The bit about ANBU and the very ending...I loved it dearly. Great work with turning the plot on its head, and the title was fabulous.
Ashcat
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseWow. I'm a really big Kakairu fan but this seems believable too. I mean how much 'need' can anyone withstand? I've always hated it when people tried to write Iruka as some saint or chick... he's human too and Kakashi is f'd up. It could easily all pan out like you described. I really liked that you kept it Iruka's pov. I wonder if Kakashi even saw it coming or understood...
blakkmollie
2007-03-10
ch 1,
abusethank you so much! *bows*
not that I really hate kakairu (I've seen some fics where it was executed in a very believable way), but most of it is complete and utter bullshit. they're just not very compatible I think. even if they do get together, and they very rarely have anything to with each other, it might very well go just like this
that doesn't stop the 13-year old fangirls who are NOT into sasunaru, however *gag*
Trespasser1307
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abuseScrew it. I just added you onto my favorite authors. I swore to not add any more but I have no willpower. I'll just keep it short.

Your angst and drama is the best. Write more. Will worship.
paranoia.pink
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abuseI like this. The fact that they broke up is cool, because so many fics treat them as an eternally happy fluffy couple.
babydragon
2006-10-22
ch 1,
abuseyou have just put into a beautifully heart-wrenching fic, all the reasons why Kakashi and Iruka just =can't be together=.

Kakashi is complex. worse than being complex, Kakashi is scarred, all the way to his soul. he mourns the death of his friend who died =13= years ago. he keeps on pressing on his scars just so they can't heal.the episode where he talked to Sasuke about revenge, just before Sasuke decided to leave, it broke my heart. because he =smiled=. the way he said that he accepted that everone important to him had been taken away, yet you =know= that it isn't true, he hadn't accepted it, simply because he's there, at the memorial, every single morning, rain or shine.

Iruka is gentle, and even better than being gentle, Iruka is kind. he's the sort of person that would want to reach out and stop all the lonliness, stop all the hurt. everyone loves him, i mean, in a world of killers and cool crazy ass jutsu and power-crazy bastards, Umino Iruka always ranks in the top 10 favorite characters. simply because he's the character who warms everyone's hearts. but what happens when his sunshine shines down on a bottomless abyss? how far can his light reach?

for Kakashi,i don't think anyone can take away his pain. it's not like he can just tell someone about his tragic past, cry, have some sex, and then go on to having a normal life, acting like it never happened. which is why i can never imagine Kakashi is a romantic relationship, period. (and no, it's not just because i want him for myself. XD)

in fact, the only possible pairing i imagine is Kakashi/Sasuke, and even that would be a relationship more than a romance. simply because Kakashi would be able to understand Sasuke well enough to want to protect him from turning into himself; and Sasuke would be enough for Kakashi to realise that he isn't alone.

(actually, it's another way of saying they'd look good being emo together.)(still, i can't stand kakasasu. or kaka/anyone. )(except in this fic. because it's what it is.)

::blinks:: did i just go off on a rant? i'm so sorry. what i meant to say was, this fic manages to potray Kakashi's existential angst in such a beautiful manner. most of your Kakashi fics manage to do that, but then he ends up dying, go figure. (ohmigod! you killed Kakashi! you bastard!)(XD XD XD sorry, i =really= couldn't resist.)in this, not only does he survive your evil assaination attempts (i noticed you tried to kill him off with a suicide at the end), he ends up having to live with more hurt to deal with. and live he will, because that's what he's been doing these 13 long years.

"He was terrified, for Kakashi's sake, that the day would come when he would wake up and discover he was not in love anymore." this line i liked =so= much, because it's when Iruka finally realises that, damn, maybe love isn't enough.

this fic, it's so bitter and pain full that i wonder if i have tendencies towards masochism for loving it so much. (i read it a couple of days ago and i still get my heart ripped out when i read it now.) just, beautiful.
Me
2006-08-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoving your fics. I am a huge Kakashi fan, myself :3

This one was lovely, in that bittersweet sort of way. I like your Kakashi, and I like your Iruka. I also like you Kakashi and Iruka not-togetherness. I'm not one for kakairu, but I rather like this, and not for the way it ended.

Though I wonder who topped in this. Usually it is Kakashi, but this is a bit ambiguous/maybe leaning towards Iruka and I like!
Lady Zephyr
2006-05-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseA very human, realistic story.

I think that's all I can say...
mamolove
2006-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abusewell done! A dark fic, with a very realistic take on how much it would take for *anyone* to bear Kakashi's burdened soul. It's not often to read an Iruka fleshed out so maturely, but I especially like the insight into Kakashi's desperation.
kalilamae
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abuseWow... that was simply amazing. We need more authors like you. It caught their personalities perfectly and it wasn't full of ickyness, excusing my stupid word usage. I *am* only 13...

Deathly Literate

(Also: since I don't have a clue what your email is, I'll answer your question about Dark. I had accidently erased the story before Dark where I had Kakashi say that so it fit, but I never had actually bothered to change it in the story I posted. Sorry if that confused you. 0.0)
een nihc
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abusei really feel sorry for kakashi.but cant blame iruka for that,at least he'd tried.the fic is realistic n slightly dark but i prefer it that way.
esther
2005-10-04
ch 1, anon.
abusewow, a nice change from the kakairu fluff that's been floating around. it's so true isn't it? love isn't about fixing people. and it takes a hell of a long time and effort to fix people by love alone.

poor kakashi...well written, but i felt the paragraphing was a bit chunky in places...
Avande
2005-07-31
ch 1, anon.
abuse*cries* Dear God, if this is what you write with a time limit, I wonder why you aren't internationally acclaimed or something. Beautiful, seriously.
Fairady
2005-06-29
ch 1,
abuseoh wow. that's just painful in a dull sort of way. i kinda like the pairing, but i do get annoyed at how happy happy some people can get with it. this is the perfect anti-kakairu. i'm glad you posted it anyway, thanks so much!
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