And the completion of a trilogy. Again, masterful insights into both of them, and you've really captured Padme's anguish. It's almost too awful to read - this sense of impending doom - but it's entirely the right track and faithful to the flawed character of the Chosen One. The bit with Padme wondering how many people will have to die because of her death was spine-tingling. Well done indeed!

That was wonderful. Great job!

Very sad, but I loved it. Good work. :)

Written as equally well as Possession. You really have a lot of insight into Padme's character- far more than most other depictions show- including Lucas's. Her plight, generally, is considerably under appreciated, but I think you've done it justice.