Haha, Very Good, Only thing that is wrong, Lee does not use contractions, and, i see you are using the shippuden versions of the characters so that means that Kiba-Kun should not be able to just pick up Akamaru as Kiba normally rides ontop of Akamaru in Shippuden, otherwise it was excellent.

Arigato Hitokage

that was great! please finish it

LOVE YOUR STORY , can hardly wait for the next chapter to come out !

Please, WRITE MORE!!

omg this is the most amazing story!

Your story is so good. I've been waiting for the tenth chapter for a really long time! Is there any way you can write faster !? LOL ,it's hard to wait for storys you really enjoy ! Well ,I just wanted to say your doing a great job so keep doing what you've been doing .

good story- continue it!

Wow... this fanfiction just must have completely passed me by earlier. I've never seen it before today and you've written nine chapters! Anyway, extremely well done and I can't wait to find out what will happen next!

~Matahari

All I can say is "Ouch!" Seriously, though, well written. I look forward to the continuation/conclusion (whichever it happens to be).

man this is one awesome fanfic need more i would like to the the brother of those to twins like tenten more lol it would anger neji this is a real good fanfic

hi

i really loved this story when you wrote it forever ago and i just remembered it. how come you havent updated in such a goch darn long time? well i sure hope you would update or something.

keep writing! i want to see what happends to neji and tenten!! its getting good! not that it wasnt good before but i never pictured neji being nice to anyone!

Plese update soon and can you plese put Naruto and Jiriya in the up coming chapters as un expected back up for Gai's team? Plz.

good story!