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MasterO'Badgers17
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseThis story is great! You get the Badger Seal of Approval
Michel Hazard
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuseLoved it alot. It was more then just a reality check. It make sense to because with Naru gone he moved on but when things come back it hurts. Write more. I totally got your back.
.Symphony.In.The.Abyss.
2007-07-05
ch 1,
abuseOh...I like this.
I'm going to write my first Love Hina fic soon too, an AU that'll be KeiMoto. I fell in love with this pairing while watching the series and your fic lengthened it. Loved it, and is faving it. :)
Yakumo-san
2007-06-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseWah I love it!!Motoko-Keitaro fics rox XDXDXDXD
Shika
2007-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm, like, so dumb for not noticing this amazing fanfic (of almost two years) sooner. D; Great job on it, Motoko/Keitaro is my favorite pairing in Love Hina and you made the story really sweet towards their relationship. There wasn't (much?) Naru bashing either. *goes off to read your other stories* :)
Manga-Greed
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful story. Great job!
Belovedheart
2006-10-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseit is a wonderful story. a real tear jerker.. but it seemed to ba lacking something... um.. what was the reason to why they got married. cause im quite curious about. couyld you make a side story about it?? but all in al your works are great.
AegisX-TAIL-
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abusenice and emotional... :) good story... Adios for now... :)
HikariNiwa
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseTHis is a very well written story. It almost brought a tear to my eye, and that is something that has rarely happened in my life.
NoshMono
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseOh, a nice take on the wedding arangement! I also like the way you close the already good story
Grey Wolf4
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great Keitaro/Motoko fic and with a great premise, okay Motoko is often impulsive with men but she becomes a better person by the manga and actually matures unlike Naru. Motoko when paired with Keitaro wouldn't abuse him for the most silly misunderstanding.
Holocron Coder
2006-01-09
ch 1,
abuseNot bad, for a short one ^_^ cool. :D best of luck with more writings
GroveWolf
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abusegood story, but songfics suck, it was distracting and i wasn't able to pay attention to the story like i should have.
Demonic Dragon Knight
2005-11-13
ch 1,
abuseawsome to say the least. love the use of the songs in here to.
Jose
2005-11-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis story was very good...for a one-shot. Good story overall though.
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