Realy heart breaking and warming story about lost and new found love. I cant explain fieling i got in my heart reading this but it realy made me happy in end.
And wile i was reading this story i had similar music going on radio so it was realy great reading this story i realy like it.

THAT is a tearjerker, friend.
Wow. And i mean WOW.

Very well written. My favorite pairing is and will always be Naru and Keitaro. But this one is the first motoko and keitaro that really seemed like it was what wouldve happened if things had worked differently.

Well done, Im subscribing. I hope to see more from you soon.
Now if you'll excuse me, I need to go find a box of tissues. Ha!

W.A.M.

This story is great! You get the Badger Seal of Approval

Loved it alot. It was more then just a reality check. It make sense to because with Naru gone he moved on but when things come back it hurts. Write more. I totally got your back.

Oh...I like this.
I'm going to write my first Love Hina fic soon too, an AU that'll be KeiMoto. I fell in love with this pairing while watching the series and your fic lengthened it. Loved it, and is faving it. :)

Wah I love it!!Motoko-Keitaro fics rox XDXDXDXD

I'm, like, so dumb for not noticing this amazing fanfic (of almost two years) sooner. D; Great job on it, Motoko/Keitaro is my favorite pairing in Love Hina and you made the story really sweet towards their relationship. There wasn't (much?) Naru bashing either. *goes off to read your other stories* :)

Beautiful story. Great job!

it is a wonderful story. a real tear jerker.. but it seemed to ba lacking something... um.. what was the reason to why they got married. cause im quite curious about. couyld you make a side story about it?? but all in al your works are great.

nice and emotional... :) good story... Adios for now... :)

THis is a very well written story. It almost brought a tear to my eye, and that is something that has rarely happened in my life.

Oh, a nice take on the wedding arangement! I also like the way you close the already good story

This is a great Keitaro/Motoko fic and with a great premise, okay Motoko is often impulsive with men but she becomes a better person by the manga and actually matures unlike Naru. Motoko when paired with Keitaro wouldn't abuse him for the most silly misunderstanding.

Not bad, for a short one ^_^ cool. :D best of luck with more writings

good story, but songfics suck, it was distracting and i wasn't able to pay attention to the story like i should have.