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| MasterO'Badgers17 2007-11-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis story is great! You get the Badger Seal of Approval |
| Michel Hazard 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved it alot. It was more then just a reality check. It make sense to because with Naru gone he moved on but when things come back it hurts. Write more. I totally got your back. |
| .Symphony.In.The.Abyss. 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOh...I like this. I'm going to write my first Love Hina fic soon too, an AU that'll be KeiMoto. I fell in love with this pairing while watching the series and your fic lengthened it. Loved it, and is faving it. :) |
| Yakumo-san 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWah I love it!!Motoko-Keitaro fics rox XDXDXDXD |
| Shika 2007-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm, like, so dumb for not noticing this amazing fanfic (of almost two years) sooner. D; Great job on it, Motoko/Keitaro is my favorite pairing in Love Hina and you made the story really sweet towards their relationship. There wasn't (much?) Naru bashing either. *goes off to read your other stories* :) |
| Manga-Greed 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story. Great job! |
| Belovedheart 2006-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseit is a wonderful story. a real tear jerker.. but it seemed to ba lacking something... um.. what was the reason to why they got married. cause im quite curious about. couyld you make a side story about it?? but all in al your works are great. |
| AegisX-TAIL- 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abusenice and emotional... :) good story... Adios for now... :) |
| HikariNiwa 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseTHis is a very well written story. It almost brought a tear to my eye, and that is something that has rarely happened in my life. |
| NoshMono 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, a nice take on the wedding arangement! I also like the way you close the already good story |
| Grey Wolf4 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great Keitaro/Motoko fic and with a great premise, okay Motoko is often impulsive with men but she becomes a better person by the manga and actually matures unlike Naru. Motoko when paired with Keitaro wouldn't abuse him for the most silly misunderstanding. |
| Holocron Coder 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, for a short one ^_^ cool. :D best of luck with more writings |
| GroveWolf 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abusegood story, but songfics suck, it was distracting and i wasn't able to pay attention to the story like i should have. |
| Demonic Dragon Knight 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseawsome to say the least. love the use of the songs in here to. |
| Jose 2005-11-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was very good...for a one-shot. Good story overall though. |