Reviews for Never Negociate with the Ice Queen

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Tezza1502 2007-03-15 ch 9,	abuseHey there! Have just finished reading this and 'Immortality Sucks', one after the other. You have a true gift for creating epics. I have found that most of us fanfic writers will maybe be able to produce a few if we're lucky. You have produced several high-quality works, IMHO. The scope of these things, the imagination that flows through every line... simply amazing! I really hope that you continue to find inspiration within yourself to keep writing. I rather selfishly would love to follow your ideas for years to come. Exceptional work! T
liteonit 2007-01-12 ch 9,	abuseawsome story i really enjoyed reading it thanks.
WalterDornez215 2006-11-26 ch 9,	abuseNot the best story I ever read but entertaining none the less.
I am the Bane of my Sword 2006-10-06 ch 7,	abuseThis is so weird... constant drama.
Fredryck 2006-07-25 ch 9,	abuseWow, this surely was a great fic...! I loved it, I mean, it was original and well-written. The crossover was great, even if I only knew Ranma and Dragon Ball (Vegita kicks **!). I also liked your ending, i would have never expected that love triangle, lol. I kinda wish I were Ranma :D! Now I'm eager to see the sequel, I want to know how Ukyo and Akane will react at the news...and what happened to Ryoga, Akari, etc. Keep up the good work! ;)
Kendoka Girl 2006-07-12 ch 9,	abuseNabiki is a sexy one. Poor Ranma! Shampoo! Oh no! Oh, whew... :) Aw, sweet ending. You brought these characters to life and had them interact in great ways. Thanks for the entertainment!
Bobboky 2006-06-02 ch 9,	abusegrade "A" awesome
Kendoka Girl 2006-05-30 ch 8,	abuseOh, I'm really enjoying Nabiki! Nice romance. :) Shampoo's a cutie. This one took me a bit to read.
Kendoka Girl 2006-05-22 ch 7,	abuse“YO TOMBOY!” he called out, hoping to pull her anger to him instead. He was ignored as Akane landed a solid blow to the sword arm of Tsuruko, forcing the woman back. I love that line! You really explore the feelings of the characters too. With successive blows, she clobbered the man, forcing him from his ready stance and crumpling him to the ground. Her kicks, while lacking in power, were much quicker and much more accurate as his eyes almost crossed when she landed a solid blow to his crotch. OUCH! Great action. I just got back and I caught a stomach bug. Ick.
Kendoka Girl 2006-05-15 ch 6,	abuseHiya, I'm in hurry up and wait mode. You really do draw the reader into the characters. I love your OC's. Dr Tofu! I got a big kick out of that name.
Kendoka Girl 2006-04-22 ch 5,	abuseWow, again, great character interaction - you really spend the time and effort to build the characters and their individual personalities. The descriptions that you put to things really bring the story to life. Great stuff.
Shinji Ikari 2006-04-22 ch 9, anon.	abuseI have never read a story this good here on FF.N. You not only captivated me with the story but you were able to stay true to the characters. You've got a gift being able to write this good. I loved the massive crossover, seeing characters from many other anime. Although I would have loved to have seen Alucard from Hellsing involved, some how I have a feeling you'd make it would (Alucard is my all time fav anime character next to Ranma). Another thing you did very well with this is keeping Ranma's skills true to cannon. He is good but he can be beaten, and you did it perfectly against geese the first fight. He had to restort the Neko-Ken to win. Then of course uber fighter Goku comes in and trains him and he can kick the dudes **. (sorry DBZ is fun and all but the characters are way to powerful) One little problem I have with the story and that is the addition of Shampoo to Ranma and Nabiki's marrige. I am not against it but why do that. Yeah it provided a little bit of story progression but not that much. In fact it would have been alot better with out it. Now don't get me wrong I like the Shampoo character I just DO NOT belive in or agree with the type of relasionship you created. Its moraly and ethincly wrong in any way shape and form. Marrige is between two people, sorry but I am very old school on this. I am not as open minded about relastionships and people now adays are. But enough of that. I really enjoyed this story and hope to see more. Have a nice day
neo82 2006-04-20 ch 9,	abuseWow, this was an EXCELLENT story. I got very vivid pictures of what was going on...the part of the story where Nabiki is in the "in-between" world, and how you introduced it to us...literally left goosebumps on me. It may sound quirky/cliche or whatever but perhaps the next book should focus around "college years" with nabiki in tokyo-u? I have added you to my alert list, can't wait to see what comes out next. (if you need a proofreader for your stories or anything, I'd be more than glad to help) -neo82
Nathaniel T Bouyer Jr. 2006-04-17 ch 9, anon.	abuseMy wife and I enjoy this series alot. We can't wait for you to start the next. Don't keep us waiting to long. your Fan nathaniel AKA Lord Nightfyre P.S. Starting my own fan fic. Thanks for the inspiration
Kiken himitsu 2006-04-14 ch 9,	abuseI’d like to say that you are an amazing writer. The only time I wasn't reading this was when I was at work or asleep. (I know I have no life lol) I have read a lot of ranma fic's and I personally think this is the best I have read to date. As I read this story, I could see what was happening as if I was there watching it all unfold. i'm going to look into more of your work :)

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