A great story. Very well written.

good story.

Very cool story. Interesting! some of the phrasing a little awkward though, but I can't tell if that's the character or not. Good story!

-Fabala

Wow, very powerful. A great POV fanfic! I enjoyed especially the 'switching' between the two sides of the character. It is a really good adventure into Gollum's mind. :)

I love this. I've never read a Lord of the Rings fan-fic before. This is great.

Hmm...scary story... and I love Gollum almost as much as Gimli! But why is it rated M? It's not that angsty, and I believe that a larger audience should be able to read it! Great job!

Gollum has never been my favorite character, but I decided to read this because I love LOTR and because I liked your Mercutio story so much. I really love this one as well, now; I think it is right on the money with regards to character, and I find it refreshing to read a really good short fan fiction (there aren't many out there, let me tell you!) I think it's made me a lot more interested in Gollum. And thanks so much for your review of my "All Through the Night"; I wrote it awhile ago, and I don't think I'd seen/heard/read Les Miserables then, but I've done all three by this time, and I happen to love it as well! (Though, as of now, I haven't got any fan fiction finished about it.) I also love Phantom, and I have a huge long fan fiction about that which I'm not sure whether I want to post it yet; I'm thinking about it. Also-about French-I, er, used to know it, but I think I've forgotten most of it. I know more German and Latin now.

Heh... Heh... *edges away slowly*

Wow. O.O Very nice. I'm still looking at your fics. This was very nice. Poor Gollum...

i liked that you wrote some words how Gollum would speak them. Very descriptive delve into Gollums mind(s?) almost would have believed it was gollum.

Wow! THats probably the best Gollum/Smeagol peice Ive ever read! You did an awesome job keeping him in character and I think the use of we, ours and us, ect, made it so real! great job,

PinknwhiteDQ

Good, good... very descriptive. Yet somehow, it wasn't as good as it might have been. I didn't feel drawn in, and then stickily entangled in Gollum's mind, like I've read in other books with rather insane main characters (example: Finding Alice by Melody Carlson).

I think what it might have been was too many verbs, and not enough emotional cue-type words.

Woah...amazing POV of Gollum. This was AMAZING. I simply love your work. AMAZING imagery, and I love how you actually go into Gollum's mind. I feel honored that you like MY story! You have the ability to make funny stories AND dramatic stories that stab at the heart. MY best attempt at being funny so far in one of MY fanfics is when Reine falls down, trying to put on a pair of dance tights standing up. Ah, but I WILL be writing a Star Wars/POTO fanfic crossover with my friend Kitty, and she's so random it SHOULD be interesting. ...I RAMBLE! How do I stop rambling? TELL ME! :'O

Oh may gosh! No songfics? But why? *sobs*. Ok, Pimpernel is insane, don't believe a word she says. Unfortunatly we're sisters, (LOL). We really are, though. I mean, we're not even aloud to send Emails to strangers so how would I have met her online. Makes no sense.

My geeky heart jumps with glee... Col.

You captured Gollum perfectly - a difficult thing to do. I've read a lot of terrible fics where people try and fail miserably, so I'm glad to see you've pulled it off. Of course, I should have expected it, coming from you, but that's beside the point. :)