nice story hope you wirte more.

Hi,

I had actually written my own story, The Forgotten, that is somewhat simular in that the ninja turtles find another turtle who desn't remember anything. So I saw your story just now and I thought I should comment on it.

I like that Donatello gets the girl. Its' sad she has to leave her human life, or that she never seemed to really like it much. Her friend didn't seem to much like a friend. THe story seemed a little short though, like it was missing something (the peices?).

Red Turtle

*whimpering quietly* Where's the rest of the story? I wanna read! :( Oh well, ya post it when ya can.

caliko_cat

Cute :) The plot was a little thin, but developed nicely.