I believe it has been several months since you last updated and possibly claimed to take it off after a week. So now I ask... Why is your story still up eh? Shouldn't it be taken off unless you wish to rewrite it now or something. -.-

Err... the character's kind of... umm.. forgive me for this... Mary Sue-ish.
People don't really like OCs too much coz they tend to become Mary Sues...
Your writing style is wonderful, but... you'd better watch more Naruto and get to know the characters and the story well...
But hey! Just like you said before, you want to have fun and give your share of Naruto in your own way, so I'll support you and cheer you on! ^_^

You're giving up this piece of art? I can't believe it! T-T

AGH..forgive me..but i cannot STAND the fanfic...its not...of my level to fully grasp...maybe because i cant stand Mary Sues...but i just want to tell u that...u have got it ALL WRONG...but im not going to flame..(and if i am flaming now...forgive me) i would just like to say...as the 1st Reviewer said..is true..but it is not in my right to stop u from writing this fic..all i am saying is that...it isnt what i thought it would be..(a good golden fic i mean) so with that im going to stop reading it.

okay...i know i just read the Intro and all...and i dont flame..cuz i think its wrong..im just gonna do my best to set things clear...The whole clan was WIPED out...and Itachi wouldnt be carless as to forget about one Uchiha...(with the exception of Sasuke)..also..ur not going along with useing the Manga or the Anime plot line (in which i conclude are the same..) and a Mary Sue..i dont like...i like OCs..but not Mary Sues...but keep up the good work...just use ur imagination and stuff..but really like my Writer friend said (who in fact has kind of the same goals as you) Do the research...ill keep posting when i read the other chapters..who knows..u might prove me wrong..

Hey, hey, keep writing, you! I wanna know what happens next! This is agood ficcie :)

You killed Sasuke and replaced him with a Mary Sue?

...Prepare to die.

Even though this story does sound a bit Mary-sue...I think you should write what's on your mind! It's good to take out what's on your mind! Just try to relate that to the story! I can understand because I made my dtory like that!" What I do for Others Happiness" So go ahead and write! There will be people that will read! Later

Sounds like is going to be a good story. I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.

Please stop writing this story, people openly mock OCs of this much of a ridiculous nature. Yours falls into the missing Uchia catagory, and from the looks of it you meshed up a hyuga to make some uber hybrid child. (yeah shes not uber now, but eventually will be) OCs are terrible your story is not written around manga or even anime facts, and if you didn't like the naruto universe enough to actually follow what happens in it. (an OC from a clan that was specifically whiped out to the last boy) Then write a fiction with your own chars or for a char that could exist. How about a nameless hyuga? Would be more believeable.