Awesome story! The way you wrote Quatre was probably my favorite, but Trowa was also characterized extraordinarily well! Very original plot- great backgrounds for all the characters, especially Duo's stint with the fairies. The actual story was so well -written with just the right mixture of foreshadowing and "WTF?" plot twists! _

Great Job,

LawsOfChaos

This was an awesome AU!

Excellent writing. Your entire story was a very lovely and realistically done piece of work. I'll be definitely looking into some of your other pieces of work.

I very much enjoyed this. I felt all the right emotions in all the right places and even though you said you had difficulty with a few of the characters, it did not make the writing feel inconsistent. I have to say that I love your portrayal of Quatre, and Sally. Thank you.

i just finished reading this story. i absolutely loved it. :D congrats, good job, and i think i'll be looking at what else you have around here. :)

What a fun story that has completely sucked up my afternoon and prevented me from doing any of the things I needed to do today! Ah well, a few hours well-spent on a very interesting AU. I liked your comment there at the end about the funny looks you got when you were acting out your own scenes-I do that when I'm writing and, even worse, when I'm reading. I think I did it a few times this afternoon.

Hello!

I just finished reading the story. Well done, I enjoyed this. I really liked the pregression that everyone took within the story. Thanks a lot for sharing this with us. :D

-Miri

this was an awsome story i loved it. It was very good ..(clapping) I hope to read more of your writings. Keep up the good work

Oh my gosh, I loved this story so much. Damn, Marika, you write so freakin' good! This is going on my fave list of stories, and you're going on my fave list of authros, and I'm gonna read, like, every other story of yours, and make 'em all my faves. Damn, this was so good! I couldn't stop reading it. It's 1 16 am, and if my mom found me here, she'd kill me, then bring me back to life and ground me for the rest of my life, and take away my labtop and paper so I couldn't read or write, and lock me in a completely white room until I go insane and apologize(aka, beg and plead for mercy)

Nah, I'm kiddin'. She ain't that bad. But this obsession of mine with not being able to stop reading your stories is gonna get me in trouble...OH WELL WHO CARES? This review is gettin' kinda long, and I gotta go to bed, so ba bai for now until I review another one of your stories. _

Very nice ending here, a perfect wrap up to this long, plot-filled wonder tha is your story. I liked how each of the boys found their niche - especially Duo with his orpahanage. And Heero liking kids was a nice touch - I coudn't help chuckling as Heero showed Duo that tehere *are* better things to do with one's mouth than talk.

:)

I liked the Heero/Zechs showdown scene - a little homage to their canon rivalry. And Wufei ending Treize's life, and Treize helping him - Treize did the right thing in the end, just like in the show.

I especially liked the very end - the Heero/Duo interaction was very touching, especially when Duo tells Heero that that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said to him. :)

So even Mother Earth herself is taking an interest in this battle? Well, good for her!

I completely agree with you about the hair thing - you also automatically hold it out of the way when you drink at a water fountain.

Personally, I don't think Death and Life are all that opposed to each other - they are both part of the great 'Circle of Life'.

And the fact that you don't write much differently with a head injury is actually somewhat frightening. ;-)

So we get to meet Dorothy only to have her die. *shrug* Ah, well. Ce la vie.

And I liked the ending scene with Sally and Wufei, very in character for them both.

You keep mentioning Heero and Duo having sex, and there hasn't even been a *mild* lime scene other than that first kiss. *pouts*

Yes, I am a hentai fangirl and a pervy bishounen fancier. :P So there.

I like the slowly building respect/affeciton Wufei has going for Sally, and the semi-sibling rivalry between her and the Manguancs.