I thought I had reviewd everything but I went to my mail and found this alert...LMAO!!

I lforget how good this story is. And now that Carlito is in the picture, it's even better! You write him so well. I love his sense of humore and how he refers to himself in the third person just cause he can...LMAO!! Is Shelton gonna flip when he finds out and go all crazy?? Or is he gonna exact revenge by going out with some skanky chick?? OH MAH GAWD!

Okay I have to go find something to post...but what?!! Nothing's as good as your stuff!! And for the record...I LOVVE Carlito/Melony!

Oh! I forgot how good this was! I went a re-read it cause I was completely lost and then read the new chapter, and I was like "ooh!", XD! I love Shelton and Mel's love/hate relationship. It's so sexy. Yeah, I said it. SHEXY!! And Shelton checking out her **? Nice touch. I figured he was an assman! :P Whoa, Jericho's wailing on Mel! Who's strong arms picked her up? You know, I think I have a feeling I know who it is. Hm...suddenly, I'm craving a carmel sundae. XD Kidding! I can't eat caramel without feeling like I'm betraying a sacred code, like for real, for real. Seriously, this chapter was really good. When the match started and you were describing how Shelton felt seeing Mel, I felt really bad for him. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Three ** for OTIT!! I mean...wait a minute...

sorry it took so long to get around to reviewing the story.

This is really good, I like the way you are setting up the feelings for either character. Great stuff!

THis is really great. let them stay apart for a while. then shelton would see just how important she is to him

Shelton's a bastard. *shoots* Oh my God! They killed Shelton! YOU BASTARDS!! Why will he not respect Mel's authoritie?!! *whacks with night stick* Damn him and his chocolatey goodness. Why? WHY IS HE DOING THIS TO HER? WHY?!?! And, no matter how much you think I'm blowing lies and larvae up your butt, I love this stury. Know why? CAUSE IT KICKS **!!

But..Shelton needs to respect her authoritie.
What's that?
Sir, step outta the car.
Sir, step outta the car please.
Sir, you must..RESPECT MEL'S AUTHORITIE!!

-MU-

bittersweet stuff right there.. But, Shelton needs to know what he's losing and/or lost.

Nice update, sweetie!

Aw...DON'T LEAVE ME, MELONY!!..Oh wait, I"m not there. >_> Darn it! (Shelton) What the hell is your problem? (MU) YOU DIRTY ROTTON BASTARD!! *attacks* (Shelton) AH! *falls over* (MU) You..*bangs SHelton's head against floor* dirty..*bangs head aginst floor* rotton..*head against floor* good-fer-nothing *against floor* conceited...*floor* BASTARD!! *CNIMBWM walks in* (CNIMBWM) OH MY GOD! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?!! (MU) *currently on top of Shelton* Uhm..this isn't what it looks like! (Shelton)...*brain anurism* (MU) I was banging his head against the floor, that's it, I swear! (CNIMBWM) What are you talking about? I meant, what the hell is going on here, cause I can't find my Snickers that I left in the freezer! *Batista walks in* (Batista) Oh..was, that your Snickers bar? *chocolate is all over his face and suit* Ops. (MU) What are you doing here? You're not in the story! (Shelton)...blech... (Batista) I was just here lookin' for a Snickers. (CNIMBWM) >_> You're goin' down, Batista-coccolus. (Batista) O_O BUT..UHMM...GREAT STORY, DUDE! *runs*

Seriously..awesome chapter. When is the next chapter due? Hm? Hm? Hmm? Dammit..I'm gonna eat your SNickers. AND your pizza stick. *evil Teal'c death glare*

-MU-

this is really great i can't wait to u post more. i Hope it's soon

Well, a fresh start is always good..

I'm keeping my fingers crossed that all works out in the long run.

Nice update & I can't wait to read more!

Aww :-( Bittersweet chapter, Melony. I almost feel bad for Sheltie.. Almost because well, he was just an **. But at the same time, at least he's realizing his mistake (I hope)

Nice chapter.

O_O Aw...they met at college?! *sniffle* That's so sweet. And of course it makes sense to me. But who cares if it didn;t? I like stuff that doesn't make sense. Not making sense is awesome!! XD But seriously..I'm digging the short chapters and all, but when's chapter 4? WHEN IS SHELTON'S LIFE GOING TO START MAKING SENSE?! And, is this going to be a short series, long series, or mid-length series? ;)

~MU~

OH NO!Mel and Shelton have to get back together!

Sheltie better listen to Jericho.. gah, men can be so .. well, I don't have many nice words, lol

Nice chapter Melony, I'm looking forward to reading more.

O_O AH! Shortness but goodness. XD XD Christian rox. "I DON'T WANNA DIE TONIGHT, MAN!!" And hehehehehehe... "Benji." You are god, you know. You are GOD. YOUR STORIES ARE GREATER THAN ANY STORIES ON THE WEB! ANY STORIES!! ANY!! YOU ARE GREATER THAN SHAKESPHEARE! *bows* Please update..I want more..please? Update your fic. PLease? I promise...I won't skim through it. Please? If it'll make you feel comfortable..I'll read it the same way you do. Please?
(FOR GOD'S SAKES!! LET THE GIRL READ THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER! JESUS!)

*does the Nobleism Cross thingie* JESUS!!

~MU~

Oho...COLD. Shot through the heart..you give love a bad name. Yeah..I'm talking about YOU SHELTIE!! YOU SUCK **!! *kicks* Durty skank man..how could he treat Mel like that?AGH! Kiisama! *blows up* I know, I"m making no sense. Anyhoozlebees, THIS STORY ROX! I love ya pairings too..OMG! Torrie/Jericho! I lurve Torrie. I want to make love to her. Wait..never mind. *Wink* Seriously, it rocked my panties. I love it..I can't wait for more! HOW DO YOU DO IT?!? DO YOU HAVE A WRITING PILL OR SUMTHIN'?!?! YOU SUCK. WAIT..ROCK..WAIT..YOU ARE THE HOLY GOD OF FANFICTION!! *bows*