::snorts:: oh my, well done thus far!!

ok. WHERE ARE YOU! i love this story, but i've been waiting for a YEAR for you to update. what happened?!?!?! please please please please please update soon.

cool story, update soon! Oh, and your story is going in my C2 community: Incredible Shrinking... So check out the other shrinking stories that I've found, and write more!

ok, you asked for help, so here it is. sorry it took so long, i didn't realize you'd updated, so i didn't see ur reply. anyway, it's mostly this one sentence : “We’re just really lucky that no one was in here sick or injured" you use it quite a bit, and i think only once would have been better, then shorten it the other times. it's a little akward to say. here's a tip: try saying some of your dialogue out loud to see if it's something you would find natural to say. i find this really helps. if it's akward or doesn't feel natural, try re-wording a bit.

i loved it. it is so much fun reading this fic, keep up the good work.

Ew. Roaches are still gross. And if a body is large enough, and immobile enough, roaches will live anywhere... (shudder... there was this nurse I used to work with that told us this story of the time she was a student... no, I won't tell you that one, it will make you throw up!)

Highly amusing, tiny officers arguing that they are who they say they are. Six inches is just as much fun as one or two inches tall it seems! But there was no way I could figure out how to make my tiny SG-1 fit onto elevators or stairs or dial a DHD so I had to take a few creative liberties when I wrote mine that you, you lucky person you, don't have to deal with since you made them bigger!

AH! no! i have the fraggle rock song stuck in my head now! thanks a lot! lol well seriously, this is a great story. i can totally see jack humming that song. its so him. lol well on to the rest of the story!

Sorry 'bout your internet!
Hope you can update soon!

aw bad luck , hope you get it fixed soon.

LOL! I hate roaches!
Nice research... and great chapter!

*giggle* especially over the 'backspace' comment.

Please update soon. I can't wait to find out who's being attacked in the office by the wounded roach.

This is a fantastic story so far, Kelinci. Top-notch. And I can just hear SG-1 talking like the Rescue Rangers.

my god, that was hilarious. just one tip, you did this more in the first chapter than anywhere else, but you need to work on making their speech sound a little more naturall. and why does sam's solution ALWAYS involve an EM pulse? it's driving me crazy! anywho, PLEASE keep writing, i love this story!

Does Davis know enough in terms of blackmail material that would convince the person at the other end to know it's him? Looking forward to the next person.