   Jazhira 2006-06-14 . chapter 1Ah! I love this to bits and pieces!! Yami the prankster/business man is so cool! I mean, those pranks they talked about were wild! I'm not good at coming up with pranks like that at all...breaking the rules the slightest bit makes me feel queasy.
Oh, and I can totally see Bakura as a football player; I absolutely adored the tendershippy-ness you added. You know, at first I thought you meant American football and I thought "Icky, Bakura shouldn't be in all that bulky padding and stuff" but when I realized that you meant the football with the black-and-white checkered ball, I thought Cool!
I especially liked the part where Mokuba cried out "Reach for the sky!" and Yami play/acted along. That was so cute! Oh my god, I cannot put into words how much I liked this fic. I really do hope you update soon!
BTW, the background information was awesome too. It really helped set the scene and give everyone a good idea of how the family life works. Very unique. I love unique!
Eek! I can't wait to see how Malik fits into this odd, insane family (anybody else notice that most families are odd and insane in their own special way?) SetoxYugi...well, not a big fan of it, but I don't mind it too much, I guess. I feel bad for Yami, crushing on his big brother's boyfriend. Man, that's gotta suck.
I HAVE to read that BakuraxRyou flashback!! Cocky Bakura plus Playful Ryou! {fangirl-ish squeal} It'll be so cute! Update as soon as you can please!!
By now, you're probably sick of me for leaving such a long and rant-y review but it's just because I liked this fic so damn much!! I haven't been able to find a good fic forever then I stumbled upon this one...{sigh} It was a wish come true. I put it in my story alert, favorite stories, and favorite authors!! But I think I'll just finish the review right now.
--Jaazi |
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