i love it! but what do u mean by "put their plans of establishing the republic of heaven on hold"? i thought that the whole "Republic of HEaven" idea was more metaphorical than literal?

Good story. I noticed a few mistakes not only with spelling and such but with somethings about the book itself. I would have like to see a few direct quotes from it in there but all in it was very good.
Update soon :)

your writing in the first chapter is great! please post the 'next installment' because this story can be really good and i want to know what happens next!!

What is the next installment??

Really great, this story!
Please don't let this FF die like the thousands of other's here :-(

Really great first chaoter, it was brilliantly described, especially the bit about the matron.
Poor Lyra and Will! I hope they meet again!
Can't wait to read more!

I think you have described dame hannah's face and hair like a crossover between mcgonnagal and dumbledore!

I need to know what happens in your version of what happens after the trilogy! Did that make sense? If it didn't, please completely disregard it. Oh yeah, please update this soon!

Wow! It's really good, please update! But... one thing. The second chapter spoilt it slightly. The first chapter was brilliant... but the second... I don't know the song, so I didn't get it. Please post the next chapter soon.

OMG please continue, pretty please?? i cried and was all verclempt when i finished the trilogy, and was pissy at pullman because he ended it so sadly so im estatic that you are continuing the story. but i noticed you are having some grammatical errors like using periods instead of commas and such. but i love you forever because you wrote this. you are bodaciously awesome! update!

love jaime

p.s. if you ever need a beta/editor just email me alright? i'd be honored to help you :D:D:D:D:D:D

Good! Continue with this please! But Lyra and Pan can seperate because of what happened in the land of the dead.
EL

i like this a lot and just to point out 4 things
1- lyra calls he-self silvertounge
2- she went to study the alethiometer at st. sophias in Lyra's oxford
3- she would never try to block out will, she loved him too much
4- she would never stop associating with the gyptians
but i like the sory all the same and await the next chapter
ps. would you read ma story I NEED REVEIWS, its wills oxford, please.