Reviews for The Life of Pika, a Melee Participant

Arkturium 2005-08-02 ch 3,	abusemoo. i know that you know that i know that you know that i will always think that this is a good fan fic. plus i kinda have to be nice since you were sitting next to me at lunch at the time. well i do mean it. luv Ashcheza
Arkturium 2005-07-25 ch 2,	abusehahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahasahhahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahah moo this from your buddy at the exact time you were sitting next to me poking me. i love it as always but i am bias but i really dont't care i love it! keep writting or i'll kill you. From Ashcheza the Avatar of Fyre
Ri2 2005-06-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseAsh isn't dead, is he? Or eaten? shudder
Ri2 2005-06-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI find the concept of the different colors being different people interesting. I like it! What's the cliche? Where is Ash, anyway?
dorko4u 2005-06-04 ch 1,	abusePROBLEMS! _ (Part in story) 'See what I mean? Oh, hi griz.' 'Hi Melanie.' 'Hi link.' 'NOW you notice me.' 'What are you talking about?' 'Stuff.' '0K.' _ The problems: 1." should replace all ' 2.I have NO IDEA who is talking in that scene, and all the other times you do that. but besides those, it was good ^^