Aw, that was so cute _

God, this is great. Miss Iris likes! (BTW, I'm not a lesbian. I'm bisexual.)

this was kool u shud turn it into a story!

this is a great story but i noticed a continuity issue: in the beginning you said Hermione's dress was a rusty color but in the end you said it was a deep green. please be consistant. other than that I thought it was a great story and you are a fabulous writer.

yay

great story

Nice ! plz continue ! i liked it ) please continue, update quickly. Black Angel

this is sweet and nicely written. well done

QD

That's really sweet! I love rare pairs, too, so I love this...

In all honesty, this story was passable. Well writen, contains all necessities. The one shot should leave no more, the last paragraph was extra information that should not been included in my opinion. Yet, well done story overall, maybe I am just biased against one shots. And one final not, 'Parts of me were tingling - parts I'd thought only boys could reach...' is a brilliant line.

I really liked this, I think you did a very good job.

Good story mabey u should write another chapter if u get more good reviews

Quite a wonderful story here, nicely done with enough love to go around, and a beautiful ending. A bouquet of roses for you! _.

Don't worry about the idiot down there...*mutters something along the words torture and maim...* he shall soon know to appreciate your work!

Toodles!

it was good i bet if u changed the ending though u could add a few more chapters with people's reactions and stuff

Very interesting! lol. well yah. I wouldn't think someone would come up with this topic so i decided to search it. gr8 fanfic. here are the next chapters!

Great story! not overdone, a simple kiss with with beautiful description.