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| Running-Wild22 2008-07-18 ch 44,  | abuse“Well, this is Zack,” Jondy said. She grinned impishly. “That child you’re carrying is going to be getting his or her first gun by his or her fifth birthday.” She and the others laughed as CeCe pulled out into traffic. So True! LOL, LOL, LOL. KIA |
| HoneyX5-452 2006-04-10 ch 49, | abuseaw, cute ending! and it was kinda cool, this jump in the future. How old are they all? and cool that they found out that white was sandemans son like in the show. so u plan on writing a sequel? no offence, but it doesnt seem too interesting with all those old people lol, really, no offense, just saying what i think. anyway, hope to read somemore awesome maxzack stories from u soon, there arent a lot of ppl out there writing them! c ya tanja |
| calistra 2006-04-10 ch 49, | abuseNice way to end your story with the final closure of meeting the man who started it all. Well done. |
| calistra 2006-04-08 ch 48, | abuseNice get together chapter. Is this the end? |
| HoneyX5-452 2006-04-07 ch 48, | abuseanother cool chapter, but this sounds like the story is coming to an end? |
| angelofdarkness78 2006-04-07 ch 48, | abuseThe kids are so adorable! And Alec asking to hold Gabby... aww. This whole chapter was great and so cute. Great job! ~aod78 |
| amy 2006-04-01 ch 47, anon. | abusewhen ya goin to finsh it it just im luvin this story so far |
| calistra 2006-03-28 ch 47, | abuseNice interaction and baby stories. |
| HoneyX5-452 2006-03-27 ch 47, anon. | abusehey! cool to see it from the other perspective, i always love the sibling stuff tanja |
| calistra 2006-03-21 ch 46, | abuseGlad the birth is over, poor Max that's a longer labour than my first (and only) and more painful by the sounds of it. |
| HoneyX5-452 2006-03-20 ch 46, | abuseaw, really cute, a baby girl, thats great hehe oh gtw, im still missing your reviews on the prequel to what if, you're busy or did you just forget? anyway, i enjoyed this chapter a lot, maxie all ** and then yet so loving please update soon! tanja |
| amy 2006-03-20 ch 45, anon. | abuseplease finish the story i wanna know what happenes |
| angelofdarkness78 2006-03-19 ch 45, | abuseLoved this chapter. LOL I can't wait to see how Zack's gonna react when MAx delivers. I hope there are no complications with the baby. Can't wait for the next chappie! ~aod78 |
| calistra 2006-03-18 ch 45, | abuseNice chapter, Max is finally going to have her baby then. |
| HoneyX5-452 2006-03-17 ch 45, | abuseah, finally! the kid(s) on its way hehe lookign forward to the next chap and to getting some reviews from u on my new MZ story ;-) c ya tanja |