I like it! I am also currently working on a beastmaster fanfiction story. i hope mine will be as good as yours!

i love it!

buried in the ashes of darkness lies a seed of hope. for one to plant it only true anguish will release the spell. with it's first bloom all thoughts of past fades as a future is paved. what will the bearer descide?

(uhh yeah just kinda said what i felt although it kind of came out as a riddle. oh wel (P cyclops )

uhh can't decide

. i know not

nervous laughter.

really good keep up the good work and please update your other stories

this is a good storie you should keep it up

hi this chapter was really good and i liked it very much. i can't wait what happens next. bye until next time please update thank you.

ps: please don't give up on this story thanks again.

a great update.

I really hope u continue very soon.

Intresting story.

Hope 2 read more soon.

Update!

sorry about the shortness of my last review - im afraid i was in a bit of a rush (darn guitar lessons to heck...:P)

anyway, now that that's out of the way, i would like to agree with "cutepony" when she wrote that there are spelling & grammatical errors, minor though, and can be fixed with either a spellcheck program, or a quick read-through. (i'd be lost without my own spell-check, believe me, you're not the only one, :D)

i'm curious to see what voden's plan is...tehehe, scheming is always fun in the meantime, though.

thanks for updating, keep it up!

Once again watch your spelling, you even put words in that were completely wrong and made no sense. I think that it would be interesting to see what would happen if Azami and Voden did end up together, you have good ideas but your story could be better if the spelling, punctuation etc. was correct. I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Cutepony

Good story, watch your spelling though, you might like to use spell check every once in a while, it helps.

Cutepony

definetly voden.

i don't know...evil guys are so sexi...