As a Zelos x Seles supporter (yes! I am one! THEY EXIST OUTSIDE OF JAPAN! @A@), I loved this fic to no extent!!
I don't see the "hintings" as disturbing, and it's a very sweet and heartwarming fic. Really, I loved how you caught Seles's personality. ^^ It's very hard to do, since she's a relatively un-important character, and the american dubbing/translating made her sound like a snotty and snobbish spoiled girl (when she's actually just very shy and reclusive). You got her personality right, when you wrote that she's calm and collected, the only time she loses her cool is when her brother is around... Such a sweet puppy love! ^^
Yes, because Seles has clearly a crush on her older brother in the game (if you ever watched "Sheena, the evil witch" skit you'll know what I mean), and that's just too cute. Many would say that's gross and morbid, but she doesn't look perverted, it's just... very cute.
I cried so hard while I was reading this fanfic, especially the part: "Do you remember me when you're slaughtering your enemies? Do you think about me when you're travelling the world with her? Do you wonder what I'm doing when you're sleeping with her!" Yes, you were pretty accurate! *laughs*

I found many fics where Seles is depicted as a spoiled, cunning little brat, who's there just to annoy her brother and to fight with him over the triflest matters, I'm happy I finally found some difference. ^^ Keep it up!! ^o^

I think it was pretty good. Seles isn't really mentioned too much in the game or fanfics, so this is pretty new(at least to me). It was pretty well-written and it really explored the relationship between the two siblings.

Ah! I read this in the Tales of Symphonia community on LJ!! It was really good! Nice job writing it! Keep up the good fics! :D

Oh, YAY! such good story! Tell me, you just guessed or that Sheena thing really happened? Please e-mail me to answer!

I think, "Aw..." What a sweet story. Hurrah for more Zelos pregame fics!

It's interesting that Sheena is the reason that Zelos hasn't seen his sister in years but that he and Sheena didn't stay together... Unless he stayed away in order to spare Seles the pain of him leaving again and again...*sniff* Lovely ending. ^__^ xx

Yay! I can finally log in again!! Heh, better get back on topic...

Oh, that was so sweet!! I love big brother-little sister relationships!! This fic was so well written and reminded me so much of my big brother and myself that I'm adding it to my favorites list!! *clicks 'Add story to my Favorite Stories list' button* Keep writing!!

~S.A.M.C.V. =^:^=

Oh, I liked this story!

I've never really seen any other stories that go into detail about the relationship between Zelos and Seles before, so this was interesting to read. This was well-written, and I didn't really think the ending was rushed. I've never seen any stories where Zelos isn't being a total womanizer, either, so it was a good change to see a different side of him.

All I can say is: "AW!," cuz that story was so CUTE! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work and keep writing!

~Rikku Abdul~

It's nice... although you could have included Zelos and his greif... but then it's been overused so whocares! Yeah it's very nice work.