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| BlackRose2009 2008-08-24 ch 33, | abuselol, good job! I feel ya, I seriously hate The chocobo trainer! I try and try alot and i still am not closer to 0:00 at all! Yomjimbo is a differnt case, hes cool! I like his entrance and his fighting skills but he charges way too much! wasted lot of money then I have to pay more! but watever, I still get lots of money anyways but its annoying, thats y i summon only Anima. Easier and stronger! :) but anyways, enough of my video game problems, I like this chapter, I like the ending better, funny! good job! update soon! k? -Alexa xD |
| Melody Canta 2008-07-31 ch 32, | abuseThis is absolutely hilarious. |
| BlackRose2009 2008-07-24 ch 32, | abuseLol, nice. Kimahri, is very smart and evil. lol nice. I did the same thing on that time, I stopped using Lulu on that time until Sin. lol. well, good job! update soonish! -Alexa xD |
| FADMHood 2008-07-18 ch 31, | abuseBy far still one of the funniest things i have ever read! |
| Imagination 5 2008-07-10 ch 30, | abuseAltana means God. |
| BlackRose2009 2008-07-05 ch 31, | abuse*snickers* Lulu's Hard... O.O! lol. sorry. I am perverted too... I love this chapter! LMAO! so funny! anywho's good job! update soonish! -Alexa xD |
| Sorceror Nobody 2008-07-05 ch 31, | abuseWell, I can't add to Jaded Ninja's review on Seymour, but Evrae Altana is basically just that it's an alternative form. Might be a bit deeper with some latin or whatnot, but that's basically it. I'm sorry, but there is NO FRIGGIN WAY that Sephiroth would do Seymour's bidding in any way whatsoever. I loved how Seymour was beaten though... serves him right for having that irritating Mortibody. Of course, he later has the Mortiorchis when in Flux form, so I daresay he'll suffer similarly if not the same! Finally, *is* the Sphere Grid going to start charging cash for use? That would be amusing, since Tidus and co. would probably rather struggle along with low stats than cough up. |
| Jaded Ninja 2008-07-05 ch 31, | abuseGreat chapter About names, this is adapted from First off all of Seymours froms are Latin Solus (when he's alive): Meaning alone, ignored. Basically describes his childhood that warped him. Natus: Means birth, since he's dead this fight/form is his rebirth Flux: Means change, i.e. he changed his form from last time. Omnis: Means everything, based off the idea he wants to become Sin and kill everything Additionally Seymour itself come from a variation of the name of Saint Maritus/Maurus. In French Maritus is Mortez and Mort is death. No clue about Evrae |
| Imagination 5 2008-07-05 ch 31, | abuseThat was hilarious, espescially the shop chst and Seymour's suicide. By the way, his last two forms are Seymour Flux and Seymour Omnis. |
| jodieedmunds 2008-06-25 ch 29, anon. | abuseTHIS IS WEL FUNNI LOL i love it it is well funni i was lookin 4 a way to kill evrea but stumbeled on dis n i loved it you should soo up date it so i can read on it is fab lol i cant wait 4 the next part lol SO HURRY UP N RIGHT IT ! I WANNA READ THE NEXT BIT LOL:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p HURRY UP LOL:p |
| BlackRose2009 2008-06-08 ch 30, | abusexD I love this story! lol. So true... what kind of death is that! letting them float to death? xD stupid. but anyways... update soonish! -Alexa xD |
| VTD 2008-06-08 ch 30, | abuseWow! You posted this around 1:30! No night life, huh? |
| Light-Eco-Sage 2008-06-07 ch 30, | abuseI've always wondered what would happen if you happened to leave someone behind. Like Kimahri. I always didn't like him. |
| BlackRose2009 2008-06-02 ch 20, | abuseI love this story! so funny! good job! Dude... you totally rock in this story. by teh way nice touch with sailor yuna moon. good job! update soonish! -Alexa xD by teh way I love how you break the 4th wall! so funny! |
| Sorceror Nobody 2008-05-27 ch 29, | abuseHey, don't insult us brits. For your information, I used to think it was "ba-ha-mut" until I got XII. Similarly, "If-rit" rather than "Eef-reet". Other than that, though, great chapter. I loved the way Valefor refused to be summoned. And well noted on the complete discrepancy of multiple shot wounds do no real harm, yet Kinoc manages to hold Tidus at gunpoint. It's always been a logic flaw, that one. |