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| hermit hideaway 2008-07-04 ch 8, | abuseGreat story, although I think I would have liked to see what the impact was of seeing Chris' memories on Leo. Maybe you made a sequel? |
2008-03-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseit was furries that Pipper had a run in after Prue died and turned into one. |
| liasongh 2007-11-05 ch 8, | abuseagain great story. all the chapters were very good and emotional. I loved it. Are you going to do a sequel with this one? it would be very interesting if you did. |
| TPO3 2007-08-23 ch 8, | abuseFantastic - there's not much more that i can say! |
| Jen 2007-06-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseHow do he know us, or Wyatt? - you meant does. See what I mean about typos? You need to use the eyeball method to proofread, don't rely on spell check because spell check wouldn't pick up this error. |
| Jen 2007-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseTypos, typos, typos. Please fix them. And this is a first, "over to the lose floorboard." Lose floorboard - I cracked up at that one. I believe you meant loose. |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-06 ch 8, | abuseWhat happened to 'Father of the Year'? |
| CharmedOneForever 2006-12-25 ch 8, | abuseHey! Loved this story, it's going on my favourites list :) |
| Amantine 2006-09-12 ch 8, | abuseGood fic. Congratulations! |
| crazyDFFgang 2006-08-20 ch 8, | abuseWow... Even if I read lots of stories with a topic like this... This story is great... I really enjoyed reading it! Good Job! (Chrissy.W.x, member of the crazyDFFgang) |
| TanyaPotter 2006-07-04 ch 8, | abusegreat story. leo was really a jackass in this one wasnt he?? |
| nighttime writer 2006-06-29 ch 8, | abuseLMAO EXPERIMENT BUNNY?! where do you come up with that. its halerious! good story! |
| blueeyesbetter 2006-04-17 ch 4, | abusePiper did not turn into a banshee. Pheobe did when Prue was alive. Piper turned into a Fury. |
| supermanly 2006-03-14 ch 3, | abuse"So far from what i read the story has been great! The best part is that it follows Chris as the center. Why does Paige sound like she's from the Souther United States? Great Story!" |
| Rkhiara 2006-02-16 ch 8, | abusesweet fic |