Update soon!! THis is really dark, but things are going to be very strange... What exactly does Questor wasnt with Luke? Is it th at if Raylin is dead (which he is) Luke will have to do what Questor wants because of the fact they are in the alliance and Luke as the SOn of Vader is in a very bad position?

how does this story not have a sequel? i mean, your ending is practically a cliff hanger!

Great story. Nice psychological drama interspersed with light moments between father and son. I wish you'd continue this one; it's my absolute favourite and it deserves your return.
fantastic.

Doesn't Luke know that you should NEVER trust a sith? That should be the first rule taught to a jedi!

Oh wow. Incredible story. Obviously, it could go on, but I completely understand you stopping here. The bind Luke is in now-- man, angst overload! I absolutely loved this, I can't believe I haven't read it before!

Oh... poor Luke. He knows! He KNOWS!

I love this story. I'm a sucker for the major angst fics, and this certainly meets the mark.

*Continues reading*

Hahaha! Vader has certainly pulled a fast one. Luke is so confused! I loved this exchange:

"For your future reference, Doctor," the Dark Lord said as he made an adjustment that stopped Luke's twitching thumb, "it is unwise to leave young Skywalker alone with tools that he might turn into weapons or instruments of escape. Count your equipment to be sure he will not abscond with anything."

"I don't abscond!" Luke protested, pulling his hand free.

HAHAHA! That is CLASSIC! I disgruntled father is warning everyone about the less than savory habits of his rebelling son. In this case, his literally rebelling son.

I'm still reading, I just had to stop and drop a review after this incredible chapter! You'll be hearing from be again!

Soo good I am being completely serious I would like to know ezactly what happened though in my mind it's kind of jumbled.

Very interesting. I hope you continue with it, after you've finished some of your other fics.

Wow that was awesome! *vigorus applause*
Think you could continue it, but the ending is fine too. I mean, it's not like it HAS to be continued.
You're such an awesome writer. I love reading your stuff.

A surprising and unique look at the destruction of the death star and it's after affects. Definetly an eye opener and an angle that i haven't before seen explored. The take that the Empire considers the allience a terrorist group is very intuitive, and relevent to out times. What we see as terrosrist acts and mindless killing, they see as furthering their cause. They beleive they are doing the right thing, and they dont think of the pain they cause beyond that fact. It had a good point in it and you displayed it very uniqley.
Thank you for writing such an original peice of work, it was a really good and satisfying read.

wow.
like it, but the way like thinks about the doctor is kinde of... not real. I think he would already have killed him. why does he believe that the doctoris his friend?

Oh, mirror rooms! Was there a lasso waiting for him from the branch of an iron tree? *cackles*

I have to say, this is my favorite of all the stories you've written. I can find nothing wrong with it. But, I would like to say one thing, however. Do NOT write a seuqel... please. My reasons for asking this, is that I believed that you wrote the perfect ending. THE PERFECT ENDING! ^^; Yeah... Usually those endings that aren't quite "complete" bother me. But sometimes the open-endness of them are great! As is with yours. Heck, with a little effort, this could even fit into the RotJ's storyline. So yeah, please don't add on. With such a perfect ending, you might ruin a very good story.

Great story! Thank you, would you please
continue!
Please!