Obviously not fluffy but it was real. I liked it. I could see the two of them starting something like this and I think their reactions were very human.

Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

Heya! As a recent convert to CSI and Snickers, I've been going through the archives of and found this story and just had to say well done. You resisted the urge to have them get together officially, but quite successfully left the door wide open for it. Bloody good writing!
-CJ

good ending, no fluff endings afe good once in awhile.
Did ever think of a cath and nick story line with the same elements as this one?

sincerely a csi shipper fan

ramona

Awesome fic! I love! I love non-coupley coupley fics! And it's about time they both got some! :D Keep up the good work! Love Cat xx

This was a surprise ending for me but it is still amazing as it always is.=)

Cheers for Now,

Sounds of Silence

OH MY GOD! I was prepared for a suggar coated I love you ending and you came up with this! It's genius!

Brilliant

Oh, I just found this story too. Man, am I ever behind! Anyway, loved it- nice and angsty and very real life: Sometimes things don't work out just the way you'd expect.

Although, in a way your other story kind of take on the same theme and resolves it for us, so that's a bonus!

Again, great job. Love your stuff.

I like the way you left the ending ambiguous. I love N/S, keep up the ** work!

When it comes to dealing with what ifs in a very confusing realtionship..nice and neat endings are not the norm. I'm glad you stuck to two people who are coping the only way they know how, doubts still linger and will contiune to fester, but it'll come to a head one way or another.

I enjoyed reading this, very, very well written and true to character. Liked the angst...of course. Look foward to more work from you.

Kristen

I thought the ending was perfect. This is one of the best stories I've read in awhile. Life isn't neat; fiction shouldn't always be either. I think the best part is that it's open...tomorrow one of them could meet someone, or they could realize that they want more than friendship. But the option is there. The last line is great. And if you decide to write a sequel, I would love to read it!

Loved this story. I hope you do a sequel. Well written.

Well, you're right, I'm not happy :-)
Seriously, excellent job on this one : you translated the doubts into words wonderfully I think.
I hope you will give us the sequel soon. 'Cause ok it can 'end' here but it would be a shame no? :-)
Thank you for this one anyway!

i just read your fic from 1st chapter to the last just right now and man, it blew me away! and as for the ending, not bad at all, at least you gave us hope! pls. write more of snickers stories your good at capturing their angst side.

eh, thats okay. it didnt end GS...thats all we can ask! well dont though.