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| Wyrdness 2005-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI take it upon myself to worship you. This is ** *beautiful*. I'd leave concrit but there is absolutely nothing I could suggest to improve these perfect bits of poetry. |
| ? 2005-06-05 ch 4, anon. | abuse? I don't get it. |
| liz 2005-06-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseLovely. Haunting and very poetic. |
| eridani 2005-06-05 ch 4, | abuseYou know, I would almost consider entering this in the poetry category. Brilliant tone and style. You've demonstrated powerful language using economy of language. There will be more, yes? |
| Jennie 2005-06-04 ch 4, | abuseVery nice. I like the way you are able to convey the emotion in them in so few words. |