Hah, that was a fabulous ending!

Seriously, I'm snickering like a 12-year-old. This was brilliant.

Ha! That was totally and completely excellent! I loved "Well, I’m glad to see that my family is getting along so well," and the last line. There definitely needs to be more of this pairing! Great fic - very well-written!

ok, so this is definitly dirtyhotbadwrong and it is also funny. Have you ever thought about writing a sequel?

Oh my God you have to continue!! I'm on the edge of my seat here, and I'm a bit wary that Irina is taking this so well. Hopefully this doesn't end in bloodshed. ;)

Wow, this rocks, and I really hope that you write more on it.

quite good!

I love the tiwst in the end of chapter! Your characterization works very well, I'm very interested in more...

pretty good... twisted though... but very insightful