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evelina
2008-12-08 . chapter 5
you must continue on with this one , it grabbed my attention and was hungry for more... Its really quite well written.
ladonna
2007-12-08 . chapter 5
I really love it. I wish u will update this story. I think it is very different.
Miss Conduct
2007-10-15 . chapter 5
Great! It really is suspenseful...can't wait what unbeknownst evil is awaiting them all this time. It hurts though that Van did get married...I feel for poor Hitomi. Update quickly!
Inda
2007-09-22 . chapter 5
AH More (Hitomi and Van right?) keep it coming (putting the fruit down)
serenityrain2233
2007-09-19 . chapter 2
i dont think i added you to my list so i am now bye...
yorin
2007-09-15 . chapter 5
this good! i cant wait to see how u end it.. it so sad though.. van and hitomi .. and how van's married.. but yeha.. i dont think i would like van much if he left his wife for hitomi.. i think this story going to end bittersweetly :"( van being with his wife but in love with hitomi but loves his wife as well.. hitomi end always in love with van but doesnt want to interfer with van life cos it wont b fair for his wife :"(
SIN Productions
2007-09-14 . chapter 5
Great chapter, I was glued to it. I haven't read this story in forever and its one of my favorites, I hope you have the time and motivation to finish it because I really enjoy reading it. You have a knack to tell a good story with detail that made it very believable that this story could've completed Escaflowne.

I'll keep my eyes open for updates! :)
Kelkatan
2006-08-27 . chapter 4
Diane, I am LOVIN this! Just like I promised, I'm needling you! I want more! You've promised so much, and I just HAVE to know what Mikael's part in all this is! First I thought he had a connection to Adele, then I thought perhaps he was Ispano (from the slip of tongue), but I know he's from Gaea. You've kept Van in character; his sincerity is most certainly Van Fanel, as well as the thoughtful responses.

I'm gonna be checking back...I know you've got more! *hugs*
EscaPhan225
2006-08-23 . chapter 4
DAMMIT get van and hitomi together!! *glare* you better not abandon it like this!
serenityrain2233
2006-04-10 . chapter 1
i think you should up date this story i like the plot
the only thing that i dont think is right, is the fact van and hitomi didnt get to gether but hey thats why its twisted fate.
and i liked the line you may not get the fairy tale ending but that doesnt mean you cant live a wonderful life, it sounds like a line from a certian movie called 13 going on 30. well i'm not putting you down i really like the story and wish for you to up date it soon.
tigger093061
2006-03-08 . chapter 4
Ok. I was ready to flame on on the issue of Van and Hitomi, but after I read the author's note and you told us not to give up faith on them, that made me feel a whole lot better. THIS IS A VAN X HITOMI FIC!! THEY BETTER FIND A WAY TO BE TOGETHER IN THE END!! OR I'LL BE VERY ANGRY, DISAPPOINTED, AND SAD!! Ok, so who is this Mikael dude. Is he really from Gaea cause that's what I got from the story. I he related to the strange people in that scene with Dravon, and all those other people? I hope, and yet im kinda glad that she's found some reasurance, but i still hope that they don't end up togther. HEY! HERE'S AN IDEA! PAIR VAN WITH HITOMI (as it should be) AND PAIR MIKAEL WITH ADELE!! It's just a muse, but i do hope things turn out right in the end...I can't wait till your next chapter!! Update soon!! Ciao! =^-.-^= meow
SIN Productions
2005-10-30 . chapter 4
Interesting...will follow to see what happens.
Kiaira-chan
2005-08-09 . chapter 4
This was my first...well second Escaflowne fanfic i've ever read. My First was read 5 years ago. Anyway, i really like it. Lookiong forword to more.
Random
2005-08-03 . chapter 4
Lovely story. I have never seen this idea used down this path. Very interesting! I'm no expert, but your Spanish seemed fine to me (well enough for me to read, at the very least lol). I am eagerly anticipating the following chapter. I really think this fic is going to make me cry - no happy happy joy joy Hitomi/Van pairing! *sob*.

I know that in your author note you said not to give up on them...do you mean romantically? Or am I just a hopeless dreamer in thining that their love would resolve this mess...?

Ah, I digress. I tend to ramble late (or early, rather) at night. Anyway. I really am looking foward to your next chapter and hope this modivates you. And if you can anwser my question, please do! ^_^

~Random
Inda
2005-08-01 . chapter 4
Aw AW Aw no no no. This better be a Van & Hitomi story. How could he how? Poor Hitomi. It better work out. ( posed to throw bad fruit) better make it good. He better have a good explanation for he big BOMB. Keep it rolling. They better get to gether now!
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