This is from Sally's POV, right? Interesting.

All I can say is, this is one good thought-provoking fanfic focusing more on the GW setting rather than the pilots' interpersonal relations, something we don't exactly find very often. This one is also an original work; unconventional and refreshing. (I'm starting to sound like a critic. -_-;) Keep up this kind of genre, and I like the fact that you don't mind killing them off. _

How sad but tender. I think it is from Sally's POV.

hai. hai. ahhh... it feels so good to be the first one to review the work of my mentor... ne? so. well, i find the lyrics very suitable. the mood of the story, eto... it made me angry. well, not at angry at you but angry at how their efforts had ended. you put it all so as something to analyze... i wish there was more feeling into it. demo, miyuki-sama, you did very well as always! Ah, i wish i could wirte as well as you do... well, ja mata! u'

Hmmm... actually I thought it was angsty... you should have told me you were doing something burialy... :) I would have told you how it was done... I love the way he thinks back... and the way you don't answer who actually us there just imply on a lot of things... It's not sucky and nothing would ever work if nobody is killed off :) and it's better that everyone is :) Keep up the good work and I hope to read more! :)