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Reviews For: Bust A Groove: Groovin' Highschool

Mrs_Biggerstaff
2007-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour story was good. But maybe it doesn't reli neat (arranging of the paragraph). So I was a bit confused with the story.. But beside tht, it was very interesting. Keep ur good stuff, pal! :)
Ritchan-san
2005-07-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour style is a little hard to understand. And, in Shorty's dream, did Heat start rapping (singing), or raping (molesting?), because you wrote raping, and that made no sense. Otherwise, a pretty good fic.
FireflyDino
2005-06-05
ch 1,
abusewoow good fic!! I want more ShortyxHeat! n_n
Please continue soon!!
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